my first yugioh spellcaster deck (please rate)?

Question

please rate my yugioh spellcaster deck
for advance format

Monsters: 20 cards
Dark Magician x3
Dark Magician Girl x1
Skilled Dark Magician x3
Chaos Command Magician x1
Breaker The Magical Warrior x1
Rapid-Fire Magician x1
old vindictive Magician x2
Apprentice Magician x2
Magician Of Faith x1
Mythical Beast Cerberus x2
Dark Magician of Chaos x1
Magician’s Valkyria x2

Spells: 14
Swords Of Revealing Light x1
Mystical Space Typhoon x1
book of moon x1
Mage Power x1
Magical Dimension x3
double spell x1
Magical Mallet x1
Heavy Storm x1
graceful charity x1
Scapegoat x1
Pot Of Avarice x1
Dedication Through Light and Darkness x1

Traps: 7
Bottomless Trap Hole x1
mirror force x1
royal decree x1
Magic Cylinder x1
ring of destruction x1
Wabaku x1
Imperial Order x1

Answer 1

Nice deck, 7/10. I was wondering why you had 3 Dark Magicians until I saw the 3 Magical Dimension.

-2 Mythical Beast Ceberus
-1 Rapid Fire Magician
+3 Gemini Elf
1900 ATK is still the baseline for an offensive strategy.

-1 Chaos Command Magician
-1 Dark Magician Girl
+2 Gravekeeper's Spy
6 tributes is too much when your special summons are conditional.

-1 Double Spell
+1 Tribute Doll
It allows you to sac only one monster for Dark Magician.

-1 Imperial Order
-1 Royal Decree
+2 Sakuretsu Armor
Imperial Order is banned. Which is a shame. Its one of my fav cards. :o)

Answer 2

6↕/10, it could b better ok yeah, u just took the structure deck and changed some cards but its not enough, if u are a begginer its ok but I tell ya I am a great spellcaster duelist and my deck has gotten my out of many problems,ry to get a higher level spellcaster, add mystical plazma zone, to make it stronger, here is a list of my deck, I have dm and dmgirl in it but I have to sacrifice them to summon my sorcerer of dark magic but now its easy cuz I have sage's stone here it is, don't copy it, unless you give me cash$$ lol joke ;) :
(Monsters)
Sorcerer Of Dark Magic
Dark Magician
Chaos Command Magician
Dark Magician Girl
Neo Aqua Madoor
Skilled Dark Magician
Skilled Dark Magician
Breaker The Magical Wariior
Rapid-Fire Magician
Blast Magician
Mythical beats Cerberus
Royal magical Library
Mysterious Guard
Old Vindictive Magician
Spirit Reaper
Ebon Magician Curran
White Magician Pikeru
Apprentice Magician
Magician Of Faith
Kuriboh
(Spells)
Premature Burial
Mystic Plazma Zone
Swords Of Revealing Light
Mystical Space Typhoon
Spell Absorption
Dark Magic Attack
Lightning Vortex
Mage Power
Magical Dimension
Magical Dimension
Magical Mallet
Mystic Box
Magical Blast
Scapegoat
Pot Of Avarice
Fissure
Giant Trunade
Final Countdown
Sage’s Stone
Thousand Knives
The Dark Door
(Traps)
Bottomless Trap Hole
Magical Hats
Sakuretsu Armor
Sakuretsu Armor
Magic Drain
Call Of The Haunted
Magic Cylinder
Draining Shield
Shadow Spell

Last tip, when you have your deck completed, cout the number of cards that can protect you LP like sakuretsu armor or royal magical library and those who attack like dark magician or breaker, you must have half of your deck def and hak atk, not exactly but close, ;-)

Answer 3

minus 1 magicians val karia and add injection fairy lily
other wise its a 8 and remember this power isnt everything
so u might want to take out a dark magician
add a sages stone to that and if u have one a sorcerer of dark magic its a great combo
ill explain
get out your dark magician girl special summon a dark magician and then bring out ur sorcerer

oh and dont forget u can now get exodia easy now u might want to add him cuz then hes a spell caster and sometimes u win cuz u got him in ur hand

Answer 4

you need to keep both magician valkyria's in your deck. if you have both on the field with any other spellcaster, you can't be attacked. one protects the other, and both protect the other spellcasters. it's a good deck because i also have one. keep it just the way it is. if you need to change cards you can come to me: [e-mail]
i have 4 yrs. under my belt
3 time local hobby league champ!!!

Answer 5

In traditional format it would be a great spell caster deck. 10/10

In advanced format it would be banned because Mage power is banned so 0/10

Answer 6

The deck is good but try to focus on a defense also.
Do that and then you will have a good Deck.

Answer 7

Just to tell you that deck is like a pro deck!!!