Sometimes it’s your fault whether you are aware of it or not. It is you and because of you I’m left with shame I’m left with heartache and you will never look back you won’t cry a tear for me; I will cry a thousand oceans for you. I would bleed for you die for you believe in life again for you. I’m left with loss I have no dreams I’m blind I feel the pain I take it in and it grows within and I die inside and call for you my voice I hear breaking through and then the echo fades and the mountain tops are bare again and I die again. when it’s cold at night and there’s no one there you are on my mind I’m empty I’m naked I’m lost and my light is a ghost that dwells so close and knows my sins I have no love I have no life I have nothing .. lies a word I know so well it keeps me safe it keeps me warm I’m alone and there is no one there you’re here with me and I close my eyes and you rescue me form a life of sin and shame and doubt so in your arms I sleep and make no sound my soul lets go my heart just smiles I’m pretty I’m perfect lies all lies.
2006-10-23 07:14:12 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
Thats some lovely writing.
2006-10-23 07:16:57 · answer #1 · answered by missgigglebunny 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you're trying to be a poet, I see some promise. However, you must, must, MUST learn to punctuate! I kept hoping (as I continued reading) that it would flow from one thought right into another, almost as if it were a dream with one idea melding into another but I found that it was rather choppy and if I didn't go back and add my own punctuation, it didn't make sense.
Sorry, try again...
2006-10-23 14:27:50 · answer #2 · answered by joncarhas 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Smells like Teen Victim.
2006-10-23 14:20:17 · answer #3 · answered by Violet Pearl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is very nice.how did he hurt you?
2006-10-23 14:23:49 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
what is your question?
2006-10-23 14:17:41 · answer #5 · answered by Ellyn 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋