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Title: One Man Army

Urnes Gots is a high school student who has hopes of going to college one day, thats if his stepparents let him

Unrnes's parents dided a long time ago when he was 12 years of age his parents were killed by their grandfather!

So foir the last years urnes has had to live with his stepparents who started out nice but when unres was older they became a pain in the neck, urnes's step-dad Fred Hanks was a soldier, he is a now retired old man who looks forward to seeing urnes wear the uniform since unres father and grandpa were soldiers as well,
but unres want s to become a doctor, jealous of his future sucess and the fact that urnes's parents left him a large amonut of moneyFred and his wife Linda want urnes to stay, skip college and go to the army but urnes refuses, so his fred who calls up
a local friend of his from the paramedic to come and get urnes, but to get their fred and linda set upa a trap that gets urnes in trouble and sent to the para were he was

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so now when he gets out urnes seeks instead of seeking revenge he seeks a way out, so he decieds to live someplace lese finsh high school and go to college and leave his eveil step-patents oonly thing is his tep-parents have the law on their side so they sent social security to look for him and^bring back home, when he does retrun urnes is torched, beaten by his step-father, no food, unres fights back at his step-father but acidently kills him! so urnes runs away while linda calls the police to d^find him.

Answer 1

That's pretty good - minus some spelling and misunderstanding - but he ought to kill Linda as well - to alleviate the problem, and bury them under the house - no cops, no nothing. As far as anyone else knows - Linda and Fred are still alive. They are still drawing on Fred's military retirement, and Linda's social security.

Essentially, Unres "becomes" Fred - steals his identity - sells the house, and moves to a location from which he cannot be extradited.

Answer 2

so he lives happly ever after...the end