It's been about a month
Since the last time I saw you
But nothing much has changed
I'm still in love with you
But I can't tell you
You got somebody
And It's on the sly
That I think about you
Wishing things could change
So we could be
And you would be
The one for me
I can't tell you
How I feel about you
Because you're already taken
There's not much more to say
2006-10-23 05:31:01 · 16 answers · asked by ♥#1 Miley Cyrus Fan♥ 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!! If I was an author I would TOTALLY publish it.
2006-10-23 08:23:25 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
There's a strong undercurrent of "want you" in this poem. I envision a girl with her arms outstretched to a guy who is in the embrace of another girl. You should put this in a place where "he" can see it. At least then, you can judge him by his reaction. I'm sorry to say that sometimes words aren't enough. Sometimes you have to catch him by surprise. Physcally catch him by surprise. Show him physically what you want. Of course, you could take out the word "physically" and replace it with "sexually". Guys are attracted to the sex part of a girl. And except for old ladies and gothic chicks, I have an attraction for any girl. Sexually.
2006-10-23 12:40:15 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I can't judge your poem. If I did, I feel like I would be judging your feelings. Your poem is valid because your feelings are valid.
It is important to share both with the one they were meant for.
2006-10-23 12:38:59 · answer #3 · answered by formerkingofscotland 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's from your heart so I dare not tread on expressing my thoughts. Just take care of your heart, and the right love will find you.
2006-10-23 12:42:36 · answer #4 · answered by Batman has left the building 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good for a song, just find the right chorus.
2006-10-23 12:34:45 · answer #5 · answered by dollface 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It seems more like a letter about your feelings,then a poem.
2006-10-23 12:43:20 · answer #6 · answered by TomEGun 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Melancholy.
Sad.
2006-10-23 12:37:47 · answer #7 · answered by starrdevine 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am no expert, but I think it's exceellent! Heartfelt and thoughtful. Keep it up!
2006-10-23 12:46:01 · answer #8 · answered by AKA FrogButt 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
send it to her..its nice and honest..might be surprised by her reaction to it?
2006-10-23 12:34:17 · answer #9 · answered by marleyanne b 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad.
2006-10-23 13:26:17 · answer #10 · answered by Judas Rabbi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋