I've a got a song and I'm wondering if you think it's good?

Question

"It's Amazing"
I wake up and I notice something new. Something's changed throughout the world. I wonder if it's something happenining to me.
Chorous:
But whatever it is I can tell it's amazing. Everything I've gone through, everything I've had
happen in my life, everything that's around me, it is all slowly changing. I can tell it's happening right now and it's coming closer and closer to me. It's amazing.
I can come from above and go down and I can come from the down and come on above. It's changing all around and it's amazing. When I need help nobody can help me. Oh, it's amazing.
(chorous)
And I can tell it's coming for me. Oh, it's so amazing.

Answer 1

It's hard to say if the song is any good without hearing the melody. The words don't have a strong resolution and it takes the right melody to carry off lyrics like that. Listen to the Beatles' "Because," for example. It's lyrics don't tell anything more than yours do, but the melody (and performance) make it absolutely beautiful.

In your case, the lyrics could be very moving if the melody fit the words. We tend to think songwriting is all about the words but melody and structure are equally important.

Good luck! I hope you enjoy the process of songwriting.