**This homework is about promoting a product, mascara. Please check my grammar and sentence structure if necessary. ( maybe can use or native english slang )
Making order before Dec. 31, we will give you 20 percent off and you will get complimentary cleansing milk. What’s more, buy two and get one free. Buy more, and save more!
2006-10-22 18:10:06 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Buy our mascara before December 31 and receive 20% off the purchase price and a free order of cleansing cream.
Buy two mascaras and receive a third for free.
(I've never heard of "cleansing milk" and assume you mean "cleansing cream.")
2006-10-22 20:33:02 · answer #1 · answered by Rillifane 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You did very well. Your spelling was all correct but the flow is a little off. You might want to try something like this:)...... not answering your homework but giving you an idea.
Place an order before Dec. 31, and get a 20 percent discount. You will also receive the complimentary cleansing milk as a gift. What's more? When you buy two, you get one free! Buy more, save more!!!
2006-10-22 18:16:30 · answer #2 · answered by kitti kitti 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Order before December 31 and you will get 20 per cent off and a complimentary cleansing milk. If you buy two, you will get a third one free. Buy more and save more!
2006-10-22 23:50:22 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Make your order before December 31 and we will give you a 20 percent discount, and you will also receive a complimentary cleansing milk. What's more, if you buy two you will receive a third item free! Buy more, save more!
2006-10-22 18:19:42 · answer #4 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Place an order before 31st of december(year?), and get a 20% off and a cleansing milk as a complimentary gift. What's more. . Buy two and get one absolutely free. Buy more, and save more!
hey chinaboy, this shud b better one, and plz specify th year, and details like.. 20% off on what? (mrp/list price etc), and if the cleansing milk is for free..
gud luck
2006-10-22 18:19:31 · answer #5 · answered by sar 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Order before December 31st and you will get 20% discount plus a complimentary cleansing milk.
There is even more, if you buy two you will get one free.
Buy more and save more
2006-10-22 18:50:42 · answer #6 · answered by roo48 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Place an order before the 31st of Dec. and we will give you 20% off and you will also receive a packet of cleansing milk . What's more, if you buy two, you get the third one free! So, Buy more, and Save more!!!
2006-10-22 18:48:28 · answer #7 · answered by SMILEY B 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Order before Dec. 31st and we will give you 20% off, plus you will recieve a free sample of Cleansing Milk. What's more, buy two and get a third one free. Buy more, save more.
2006-10-22 18:15:12 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you make your order before December 31st, we'll give you 20% off and you'll receive complimentary cleansing milk. What's more, by two and get one free! Buy more, and save more!
Sounds good, buddy. Good luck with your project :)
2006-10-22 18:25:32 · answer #9 · answered by jennabeanski 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you order Before December 31, we will reward you with an extra 20% off. Plus, as an extra bonus; you will also receive a sample of our Cleansing Milk. What's more, if you buy TWO you will get one FREE!
BTW: I trust whoever is receiving this offer knows what two things they have to buy and what they are getting for free because it is NOT clear to me...
2006-10-22 18:24:27 · answer #10 · answered by ronibuni 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋