You think I haven’t changed
Over you in every way
I don’t care what u say
You will be miserable
No matter what the day
You say your happy
But rethink what u just said
You say you cant remember anything
But the truth is to me your dead
I don’t care what u said…
Your dead to me, you always will be
Its easy to see, that u miss me
You’ll stare me down
As u watch me go
We both know
It was time for me to go
Your tore me into a thousand piece
Not caring what you would do
You hate it when I put u down
Knowing u hate it is what keeps me going
I sleep sound
I hate you so much
No matter what u do
You’re a joke to everyone u know
Even your friends laugh at you when u go
Everything you have said and done
I have to say, and I know its low
Ive never said it anyone but you
And the truth is
And il make it known
I hate you so
2006-10-22 12:20:12 · 8 answers · asked by Scarlet5 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
o and should i send this to my ex... he thinks i cant write, poetry, lyrics or anything.
2006-10-22 12:31:25 · update #1
WOW. those are really good lyrics/poem but as i read it i like made an entire rock song in my head ... it can go both ways! poem or rock song. both.
2006-10-22 12:23:15 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hate to be the one you wrote that about!! WOW!! It would make a good song.What you need to do is set it up - chorus and maybe put a little more into it. However, before you do that you need to decide what type of song it will become - metal, rock, country, pop, R&B..... Personally I vote for metal...LOL!! Cause the lyrics would be intense....
2006-10-22 19:28:54 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it could be mad to be a reall good metal song with sometime to put music to it it could sound good the lyrics are good dont give up wrighting
2006-10-22 19:26:43 · answer #3 · answered by lespaul98 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
with some revison you could make it into a decent song, but it might be best kept as a poem
2006-10-22 19:23:36 · answer #4 · answered by ILL BILL 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
depends on the music, the beat, rift, you get the idea....very talented thought, is this from pesonal life?
2006-10-22 19:23:41 · answer #5 · answered by TONY B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
probably no on both counts, but it;s nice to vent your frustration,
2006-10-22 19:24:03 · answer #6 · answered by Grev 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no i like it better as a peom
2006-10-22 19:30:42 · answer #7 · answered by lady_purple0995 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
rock song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-10-22 19:23:43 · answer #8 · answered by purple_gurl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋