The first words out of Dr. Drake’s mouth that day stopped me cold. "By the end of the year", he said, "everyone in this class will be creating masterpieces, everything from lifelike portraits to beautiful pieces of pottery.”
2006-10-22 07:08:58 · 4 answers · asked by ckopczynski@sbcglobal.net 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Grammatically speaking, it is fine. The punctuation, however, needs a slight adjustment.
The first words out of Dr. Drake’s mouth that day stopped me cold. "By the end of the year," he said, "everyone in this class will be creating masterpieces, everything from lifelike portraits to beautiful pieces of pottery.”
2006-10-22 07:11:36 · answer #1 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about this:
Dr. Drake's words that day, stopped me cold. "By the end of the year, everyone in this class will be creating masterpieces; from exquisite pottery pieces to beautiful lifelike portraits," he said.
Good luck.
2006-10-22 14:31:20 · answer #2 · answered by Laurel_Eden 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sentence doesn't have an "a" in it.
Work on that first... then we'll deal with the sentence itself.
2006-10-22 14:12:44 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
no
2006-10-22 14:17:02 · answer #4 · answered by Taylor H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋