As fashion-conscious Gilly Woodward left Harrods last Friday,she felt proud of the $90 designer jeans that she just(buy).But when Gilly ,31,(return) to the store teh next day to do some shopping, she (bar) from entry because she (wear) the same jeans.Gilly now back home in Liverpool, (stay) with friends in London for a few days.She explained what(happen). "I (walk) through the swing doors when sudnelly I (stop) by a large uniformed security guard.He (point) at my knees and said my jeans(tear) and I ouldn't enter.I tried to tell him that I (buy) them in.Harrods the day before,and that the torn bits were fashionable.But he(listen).He told me to get out.By this time a crowd of people(gather) .I (leave) immediately beacuse I never( feel) so embarrassed in my life" A spokeperson from Harrods said that teh dress code(introduce) in 1989,and it states no beachwear,no backpacks,no torn denims.
2006-10-22 03:36:41 · 6 answers · asked by Diana L 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Ignoring the bad gammar and punctuation
As fashion-conscious Gilly Woodward left Harrods last Friday,she felt proud of the $90 designer jeans that she just BOUGHT.But when Gilly ,31, RETURNED to the store the next day to do some shopping, she WAS BARRED from entry because she WORE the same jeans. Gilly now back home in Liverpool, STAYED with friends in London for a few days.She explained what HAPPENED "I WALKED through the swing doors when suddenly I WAS STOPPED by a large uniformed security guard.He POINTED at my knees and said my jeans WERE TORN and I couldn't enter.I tried to tell him that I BOUGHT them in.Harrods the day before,and that the torn bits were fashionable.But he WOULDN'T listen.He told me to get out.By this time a crowd of people HAD GATHERED .I LEFT immediately because I never FELT so embarrassed in my life" A spokeperson from Harrods said that the dress code INTRODUCED in 1989,and it states no beachwear,no backpacks,no torn denims.
2006-10-22 03:49:18 · answer #1 · answered by Philip W 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is easy...
As fashion-conscious Gilly Woodward left Harrods last Friday,she felt proud of the $90 designer jeans that she just(bought).But when Gilly ,31,(returned) to the store teh next day to do some shopping, she (?bar?) from entry because she (wore) the same jeans.Gilly now back home in Liverpool, (staying) with friends in London for a few days.She explained what(happened). "I (walked) through the swing doors when sudnelly I (stopped) by a large uniformed security guard.He (pointed) at my knees and said my jeans(were torn) and I ouldn't enter.I tried to tell him that I (bought) them in.Harrods the day before,and that the torn bits were fashionable.But he(wouldn't listen).He told me to get out.By this time a crowd of people(gathered) .I (left) immediately beacuse I never(had felt) so embarrassed in my life" A spokeperson from Harrods said that teh dress code(was introduced) in 1989,and it states no beachwear,no backpacks,no torn denims.
I'm not stupid either... but that was a clever way of getting the answers!
2006-10-22 03:50:51 · answer #2 · answered by readbetweenthelines 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Promise you've already done it? Cross your heart? Then here it is, with the spacing and punctuation corrected as well:
As fashion-conscious Gilly Woodward left Harrods last Friday, she felt proud of the $90 fashion jeans that she had just bought. But when Gilly, 31, returned to the store the next day to do some shopping, she was barred from entry because she was wearing the same jeans. Gilly, now back in Liverpool, had been staying with friends in London for a few days.
She explained what had happened. 'I was walking through the swing doors when suddenly I was stopped by a large uniformed security guard. He pointed at my knees and said my jeans were torn and I couldn't enter. I tried to tell him that I bought them in Harrods the day before, and that the torn bits were fashionable. But he would not* listen. He told me to get out. By this time a crowd of people had gathered. I left immediately because I had never felt so embarrassed in my life.'
A spokeperson from Harrods said that the dress code was introduced in 1989, and it states no beachwear, no backpacks, and no torn denims.
*refused to listen ... would be just as good; did not listen .... OK but not as strong. Hope that helps.
2006-10-22 03:47:57 · answer #3 · answered by mrsgavanrossem 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As fashion-conscious Gilly Woodward left Harrods last Friday,she felt proud of the $90 designer jeans that she had just bought. But when Gilly ,31,returned to the store the next day to do some shopping, she was barred from entry because she was wearing the same jeans.Gilly now back home in Liverpool, is staying with friends in London for a few days.She explained whathad happened. "I walked through the swing doors when suddenly I was stopped by a large uniformed security guard.He pointed at my knees and said my jeans were torn and I couldn't enter.I tried to tell him that I had bought them in.Harrods the day before,and that the torn bits were fashionable.But he would not listen.He told me to get out.By this time a crowd of people had gathered .I left immediately beacuse I never felt so embarrassed in my life" A spokeperson from Harrods said that the dress code was introduced in 1989,and it stated no beachwear,no backpacks,no torn denims.
2006-10-22 03:43:44 · answer #4 · answered by MAC C 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
bought, returned, was barred, was wearing, staying, had happened, was walking, was stopped, pointed, were torn, had bought, wouldn't listen, had gathered, left, had felt, had been introduced
2006-10-22 05:39:10 · answer #5 · answered by sumaravindran1958 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You can call me stupid, but I always had someone double check my work, so you'll get the benefit of the doubt from me this time.
bought
returned
was barred
wore
stayed
happened
walked
was stopped
pointed
were torn
bought
wouldn't listen
had gathered
left
felt
intoduced
2006-10-22 03:42:27 · answer #6 · answered by firelook 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋