I give you my heart it's yours to keep,so put it some where safe under lock and key. now that you have it, i'm proud to say. your in my heart and that's where you will stay.
2006-10-21 23:17:40 · 4 answers · asked by linda b 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
Sweet and heartfelt. Get a nice blank card & write your verse into it. I'm sure your partner will be touched.
2006-10-21 23:52:47 · answer #1 · answered by amp 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
ya, change the lock & key.....
And change the "so" to "hope you"
it will sounds more poilte....
ii try my best:
I give you my heart, it's yours to keep,i hope that you put it some where safe under locks and keys. now that you have it, i'm proud to say, once my hearts are with you, i am forever yours and thats where you will stay in me. Deeps and forever there.....
2006-10-21 23:55:09 · answer #2 · answered by Vengence 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it really depends on who the recipient is.
if that person is smitten by you, the message means little anyway, it is the intention that counts. but make sure there are no grammatical or spelling mistakes ... :)
2006-10-21 23:49:40 · answer #3 · answered by peace 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM. pretty cool...but lock n key doesnt sound too poetic
2006-10-21 23:34:28 · answer #4 · answered by pri 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋