Is this a good comic idea?

Question

I'm having this idea for a comic I'll start drawing soon. Please tell me if there's something I can improve. It's about a teenage boy who lives with badly misbehaving parents, has no friends, and has bad things happening to him all the time. Later one day that he discovers that he can shoot fire with his finger! In demon form his hair turns orange and his eyes turn red. While a spy tries to figure out what's the deal with the boy with the fire power thing. Later in the future he'll discover more amazing powers of his!

It's jus the beginning people! There will be more stuff later on! I just want to thank the one with positive answers.

Answer 1

Hmmm well, i think its a bit cliche. Try to think of some other super power not used before.

Answer 2

Try and come up with a back story. Why did he become a demon? Why are his parents so bad?
Is the spy an actual spy? Or a teacher, or a sus friend. Is he good or evil?
Doe the main character misuse his fire to burn down his neighbours tree house....nearly killing the kid on a sleep out and then the hero decides to be good?
Or is he an anti-hero. Just pure evil.
Is he good in human form, but like the hulk is bad when he changes.
Many things to think about. I am a writer. I do children's stories. You need to dream about this character. Lay in bed with your eyes closed and see his world. Imagine you are him and figure out every motivation.
Good Luck. OH and here is a website I found sometime ago that is great for characters names and you could use it for story ideas I guess.
http://www.seventhsanctum.com/index-name.php
And stay the course. This comic might not turn out to be best seller material. But the next one might. It is all about learning your craft. Don't let yourself give up or get bored. Try and stay focused.

Answer 3

i think it's a great story. maybe he should practice his powers on his mean friends first. and ofcourse he should have a sidekick, who's loyal to him from the start. you know what would make it more interesting? if you would use animals instead of humans, like a poor, mistreated donkey that suddenly discovers that he can transform into this red-haired stallion (with wings even!) and can shoot fire from his mouth or hooves. i also suggest a romantic angle, where the donkey fancies some horse chick at first, but isn't aware that another simple donkey girl likes him for who he really is. so waddya think? anyway, good luck with your project, and if ever this turns out to be a blockbuster movie, don't forget me ok? :)

Answer 4

sounds like a good idea, hard part with any character with a superpower is a good backstory to it. the usual theme with a demonic power is a curse that turns into a gift. you might want to go with somthing like the boy cant control the power at first then learn to channel it. with something like that you could make it a long story arc.

Answer 5

there's a toddler who's quite stupid.he d;nt listens to any physique no longer even to his mom and father.His mom and father instructed him to be wonderful with neighbers and with different youngsters interior the college.yet he ruin nieghbors glass homestead windows,throw airborne dirt and dirt on kidds.He use his toy air gun on harmless birds.he's all tousled.Its seems that he's not mentally customary.the rationalization of his behaviour is that he replaced into molested with the help of his uncle(uncle Sam),who used this kidd for his excitement. - i think of u understand the youngster. - - - His call is osama bin encumbered it is tale subject matter,for a great hit comedian.

Answer 6

Sounds good so far, but I think the boy needs a dog, or some kind of sidekick.

Answer 7

try to explian why he is a demon and why the spy is after him

Answer 8

sounds cool u will prob make millions

Answer 9

has a powerful power but no monters.

Answer 10

It is as stupid as that hat you have on !