i`m a singer, and i have a lot on my mind, screaming fans, hand hurting from sighing autographs, you get the drama.
i need help. i`m stuck in a song, this is what is have so far...
you know how i feel
when you do that
so stop-stop-stop
you can kiss him
good bye, yea
cause it`s
over-over-over
it`s good bye
you know how i feel
when that happens
your in my heart
but, it`s over-over-over,
it`s good bye
i know-but, just
do what cha want,
i could care less,
it`s just over-over-over,
it`s good bye...
could you add on, just a little? i`ll give you some points, or, tokens, or whatever you call them. thank you.
2006-10-21 14:27:21 · 10 answers · asked by beautiful 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
it's cliche, over done, and unoriginal.
2006-10-21 14:30:32 · answer #1 · answered by shih rips 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
gonna have to think a little more outside the box sweetie, theres tons of songs like that, do something different, shake it up a little....... and dont put songs on the internet if u think there really good, cause then if they are, u got a copyright issue on your hands.
try something different, dont go for the obvious.
2006-10-21 21:43:26 · answer #2 · answered by char 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this song is over
my career is over
im gonna get a ROVER
and travel to dover
ya ya ya
2006-10-21 21:31:12 · answer #3 · answered by who da wha? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well i think its good but it could need some spice in it though and some parts sound like a broken record
2006-10-21 21:42:53 · answer #4 · answered by *Living a {{ღяøM@N!Cღ}} Tragity* 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love
i hate u
i want u
but,it over,over over
its goodbye
2006-10-21 21:34:27 · answer #5 · answered by christiscool4ever 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh baby it's over right now i'm bout ta tell ya it's over-over-over right now so let me go right now-now-now it's goodbye-goodbye bye my love
2006-10-21 21:47:34 · answer #6 · answered by advice girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow, singers with a lot on their minds wanting us yahooligans to help compose.....compost LOL
2006-10-21 21:33:34 · answer #7 · answered by phyllis_neel 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ya might not wanna put that on the net, cuz people can steal it
2006-10-21 21:35:21 · answer #8 · answered by Lor-the-Giraffe 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this "song" makes my head hurt
2006-10-21 21:42:10 · answer #9 · answered by raindrop 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, but it's lame, lame, lame. : (
2006-10-21 21:49:54 · answer #10 · answered by ChaoticChicaLovesJT 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋