Love will break your heart
Love will break your silly heart
Love will make it fall apart
Love only leaves the greatest mistakes
Gives only little pleasure then poof it’s gone;
Leaves u depressed reading this poem
So go have sex and a little fun;
But be careful don’t let your heart in and ruin it all
So lock it up and throw away the keys
And don’t let it penetrate any of your activities
So it would be the end of its silly tragedies.
2006-10-21 04:34:17 · 14 answers · asked by hotloverxo328 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
do u sugest any improvements?
thanx for ur time! ♥
2006-10-21 04:35:32 · update #1
I agree and like!!!! But true love never dies so I guess you you thought you had love....Your mind lied to you!!
2006-10-21 04:48:37 · answer #1 · answered by 800 bound 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its good and soooo true but we all do it again and again what do you think of my poem i wrote for my cousin who died a few years ago it was more for his mum
A mother a child is bind for life, from the day you was born to the day that you die, you was brought into this world for a meaning of love, whether you were bad or good it dont matter as you were my flesh and blood i say to you with all my heart you were my son and you will go on, in our hearts and our minds
I read this in church its not all of the poem as i cant remember it all but i wrote it down for her on fancy paper and she framed it it was a really emotional time as he was a good lad.
2006-10-21 04:44:55 · answer #2 · answered by vicky s 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hi candy Judy, i'm great Granny absolutely everyone thinks i'm wonderful go ask my 4 Grandkids Wow Granny is a great Granny Many days into the nights Granny is often there for us She is the final great exciting and that i do love my Grandkids.. Your buddy, poppy1
2016-10-02 12:51:48 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It kind of makes me sad... I like the wording of it, but it makes it sound like somebody has been through a lot of trouble with love... I may not agree with it, but it's cool.
2006-10-21 04:36:21 · answer #4 · answered by misery 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is great. You are a good writer and I like it
2006-10-21 19:06:12 · answer #5 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Did someone mention sex? Sorry, was passing through and thought I heard it...
2006-10-21 04:42:44 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sound a little depressing to me.
2006-10-21 04:38:39 · answer #7 · answered by MJane21 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice but you need to make it more deep and powerful it feels like you found this copied and pasted it sorry but you need more time
2006-10-21 04:36:14 · answer #8 · answered by EMO cupcake 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Unusual!@
2006-10-21 04:36:17 · answer #9 · answered by nswblue 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yea smart post it online so people can take credit for it.
2006-10-21 04:38:33 · answer #10 · answered by . 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋