I sat down and tried to write
a sweet, little love song in the moonlight.
I wanted it to have the sweetest words...
ones you have not yet heard.
I tried to write a catchy little tune
sitting there underneath the moon.
I tried alternative, I tried to make it rhyme.
I tried a little rock and roll, jazz and even ragtime.
I made it country and then changed it to blues.
I'm still trying to write it (and its almost noon)!
I don't want it too mushy or ten pages long.
I just want a sweet, little love song.
I don't want it confusing or full of white lies.
I guess, at least , I can say I tried!
But, I'm DONE NOW! I can't write it!
And there is no use going on.
So, I guess I'll just send you
this sweet , little love poem.
2006-10-21 01:54:56 · 8 answers · asked by Heather E 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
It's a Little to Bouncy, but a Great Effort Never-the-less!!
Keep Going!!
2006-10-21 01:57:20 · answer #1 · answered by J. Charles 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You obviously have some writing talent. I think though, that you need a better focus for your love poem. You might want to go to the library and look up Sara Teasdale. She was a poet who wrote great love poems. A good love poem requires a theme and a context. By looking at some famous poets work, you'll get some ideas...
2006-10-21 01:58:21 · answer #2 · answered by cheyennetomahawk 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-02 12:48:23 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's very sweet. It would be very flattering to recieve a poem like that.
2006-10-21 02:08:23 · answer #4 · answered by chr1 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
;) catch the tears. that was cute. keep writing
Best Wishes
2006-10-21 02:03:33 · answer #5 · answered by trice 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i all so write poems..and i think it is really sweet...i like it...
2006-10-21 01:59:13 · answer #6 · answered by nightirene45 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job.
2006-10-21 01:56:38 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Its ok
2006-10-21 01:58:09 · answer #8 · answered by Daniel S 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋