would someone give me some ideas to help my yugioh deck?

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monsters:
mirage dragon x2
mystic swordsman lv2 x1
marauding captain x2
breaker the magical warrior x1
gravekeeper's watcher x1
elemental hero wildheart x2
exiled force x1
amazoness swords woman x1
goblin attack force x1
ninja grandmaster sasuke x1
don zaloog x1
d.d. assailant x1
rocket warrior x1
d.d. warrior lady x1
penduin soldier x1
mataza the zapper x1

spellcards:
confiscation x1
axe of despair x1
heavy storm x1
giant trunade x1
reinforcemant of the army x2
mage power x1
scape goat x1
hammer shot x1
swords of revealing light x1
united we stand x1
fusion sword mursame blade x1
riryoku x1
mystical space typhoon x1
nobleman of crossout x1
malevolent nuzzler x1
black pendant x1

traps:
forced back x1
dust tornado x1
threatening roar x1
bottomless trap hole x1
magic cylinder x1
mirror force x1
trap hole x1
seven tools of the bandit x1
blast with chain x1
sakuretsu armor x1
magic jammer x1
dark deal x1

Answer 1

ok first don listen to C.c, he is an alright duelist but from looking at his deck it seems he does not win alot.

ur deck seems like tournament style, pretty g00d.

warriors, so take out mirage dragon it does not fit, and it will cut ur deck smaller, or replace with better warriors.

ur monsters seem great, but 4 mor brute force u may want throw in 2 more goblins, and a zombya the dark.

i run warriors too, but don use equip, they r to easy to get rid of, one fissure takes out a mataza an all equped to it.

instead i run monster destructiom, 1 crossout, 2 smashing grounds, 2 fissures, 2 hammer shots, lighting vorteX,that way i clear opponents monsters while slaughtering him with warrior force.

i like that ZaL00G, it fits perfect.

in ur traps, same thing more monster destruction instead of stall.
get one more sakaretsu, an bottomless, replace forced back and
blast with chain.

maby throw in mobius for spell/trap destruction., coz incase u fight staller decks.seventools needs to go, becoz of life pont cost, dark deal and magic drain need to go as well becoz of costs.

usuing cost cards are bad.

replace those with royal decree, it is easy to get rid of if u need to, and get 2 magic drains, ( with those cards ur not paying anycost while ur opponent IS!!.

one other great card 4 u is pot of avarice, birngs back ur warriors.

remeber a good deck has 40-45 cards, and always draws what it needs, with anyhand u shuld be able to harm ur opponent.

if u want, with running monster destruction with those cards listed above, run 2 brain controls, an like a few sac monsters, like thetalos who discards card from opponent, mobius, vamp lord, hard to get rid of, zaborg thunder monarc, destroy 1 monster when summoned.

brain ctrl ur opponents monsters than SaC Em!!

brain wrks in any deck.

another great sac monster gurdian sphinx, hard to get rid of now, only 1 crossout allowed.

return endlessly, whuile waRRiOR ASSuALT.

well, i don see the warrior returning alive, verty critical.

well, g000d LuK, hoppe ur deck goes well.

Answer 2

Monsters:Only one Mirage, and no GraveKeeper Watcher.
Spells: Get rid of Black Pendant and Malevolent Nuzzler.
Traps:Shorten traps to about 5. Keep Mirror Force, Magic Cylinder in the traps area.
Rating: 8

Answer 3

are u a beginner? I used to add the cards I got every day cuz they where new, it looks like the same to you I think, well I have a spellcaster deck and I used to have E hero wildheart bcuz of its effect so its not bad, try getting urself a theme u know, a really good top monster in that theme, warrior, dragon , machine w.e u want so good luck pal ;)

Answer 4

u have a good deck but u need to work on ur combos like 4 instance if u have both marauding captains on the field they wouldnt be able 2 attack them w/ monsters

Answer 5

You need to add a "Monster Reborn" spell card to your deck.

Answer 6

what is yugioh????ive never heard of it...
soubds like a good deck though....
sry i cant help you there