Every once in while people always stared.
Wonder if their heart would every find peace in this world.
Day and day slip by, as if your heart trying to stop.
You really didn't want people to actually see this broken soul,
Knowing each day you stuffer in eternal pain.
Sometime it seen as if every thing turn dark.
Leaving little light to believe in;
All the hateful word stare at you blinking.
I couldn't believe that you were lonely in this world.
You always act so natural.
Know one saw this sorrow expressing,
upon your face.
The clock ticking as time slow down.
All the time you knew the deep sorrow;
laying in your path.
You're eye stared at the empty world.
All that you knew is disappearing,
Saying good bye and leaving behind the memories.
This poem I wrote for Tyler Amft. Who was one of my classmate last year in science and he end his life. Know one really didn't no that he felt so much pain. I hate it when people talk trash. Rest in peace- 10/18/06
2006-10-19 13:34:56 · 6 answers · asked by Tori 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Not bad. How about "Silent Pain".
2006-10-19 13:39:46 · answer #1 · answered by Dogness 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Saying Goodbye
2006-10-20 12:10:58 · answer #2 · answered by renegade41 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You could call the poem, "Don't Leave Yet" or "Goodbye to Tyler."
I'm not a poet, so can't really comment on the content or the form.
2006-10-19 21:08:09 · answer #3 · answered by Ginger/Virginia 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
title: a path to a face...
2006-10-19 20:45:33 · answer #4 · answered by John 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's good but i don't know what title it should be...sorry
2006-10-19 20:42:55 · answer #5 · answered by Innocent 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sucks
2006-10-19 20:45:56 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋