i have to write an essay to become a member of a speical dance team but i need to know how to finish this question.. please help
the first paragraph i have is ..
I think joining the Junior Membership will benefit me in many ways. I’ve heard so many great things about this program and I think it would be a amazing experience for myself and my dance .... i had expirence but it dosent workk... will someone please help me finish this sentancee!!
2006-10-19 11:10:32 · 2 answers · asked by beatz ! 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
something about forming friends or special bonds that could last a life time
2006-10-19 11:13:59 · answer #1 · answered by wkdwchofwest 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
First off, it should be "an amazing experience". Second I think you should just end the sentence after dance. If you need to add something else to it say your dancing skills or fundamentals.
2006-10-19 18:22:43 · answer #2 · answered by JG 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋