READ MY STORY, ideas for the next part? ;Dd?

Question

please help due tmrrw, i've thought about it for soo long.
still don't know what to write next and how to end it or make it a cliff hanger

ideas please?

The room was cold, and dark with eerie sounds of the door creaking it was such a quiet room you could hear the water gurgling through the pipes. On the walls of this room there were handprints. They were no ordinary handprints, they were hands that were being forced and dragged across the room. My normal English room suddenly felt haunted and with a sudden gust of wind the door slammed shut. Then, there was silence.

Minutes past by, unexpectedly there was a sudden loud drop of something. I looked down the building and there was a body. I was petrified, I couldn’t think, I couldn’t feel a thing. I closed my eyes trying to coerce myself into believing I was wrong. Looking down again, I saw it. It was definitely real. This adventure of exploring the school no longer felt like one. It was way scarier.

I went down to where the body was, just 10 feet away from it every muscle of my body tried to stop me from moving any closer. However I had to see who it was. Walking just a little closer I stopped. I burst out loud crying my heart out, it was Matthew. My heart stopped beating, it was like time had stood still, it was just me and dead Matthew. His eyes were still opened, glaring at me like he was trying to tell me something, but I couldn’t figure it out,

Matthew, he was one of my best friends. He never minded about my poor background and the fact that I was motherless and never questioned about it. You could ask nothing more from him, he was caring, nice and just a perfect friend who always had that heart warming smile on his face. Apparently, now he’s gone.

Millions of things went through my mind at the same time but there was just not one reason why Matthew would end his life, unless, maybe he didn’t. What if he was murdered? But who would want to murder Matthew? I had absolutely not a clue.

“Hello? Anybody there?” a sudden voiced asked.
I didn’t reply as I was already in enough trouble for sneaking around. Not sure of what to do I sneaked like a shadow as silently as possible back home.

Walking down the narrow street with only the sound of the wind and the trees rattling, a sudden flashback came upon by mind. I could see Matthew and me walking down the same street and was telling me something important. I couldn’t recall what he said, but I was sure that it was the reason to his death. I stayed up all night thinking about it and soon cried myself to sleep.

I was up at the break of dawn; it was all over the news. There was one very peculiar thing about it, the news had said that they were definite that it was a suicide, but from what I saw yesterday and just the feeling I had, it was definitely not.

Skiving school for the first time made me feel uncomfortable, but I had to do it because I was desperate for the truth. …

Answer 1

I'm not going to read it, I'm not doing your homework for you, and I'm sure as hell not giving you my ideas for free.

Answer 2

ok how bout ur person tires to find out more and goes back to the crime scene and find out something important maybe a message matthew left that noone noticed. ur person doesnt yet know what it means but wants to go to the police to tell them that they missed something. its already getting dark but ur person still decides to go. them in a dark alley u hear foot steps following u when u turn around there is noone but u hear them and ur sure someone is following u. u walk faster and faster. when u reach the lane opposite the police office u slow down suddenly u get attacked from behind u cant scream or run away. when u face the attacker u realise who he is and what matthews message ment. suddenly everything makes sense. but then u feel a sharp pain and realise the attacker shot or stabbed u. he runs of. u cant move because of the pain. u just lie there and stare into the sky. u see ur life flashing passed u. suddenly u hear foot steps. is someone coming to save u.
either go on from there and make a happy or not so happy end or just leave it as cliffhanger.
hope i could help

Answer 3

It's intriguing and I just like the twists too, however that is the article. They have got to be twists. As quickly as you mentioned she wakes and unearths a boy in her room - I knew it was once a ghost. How else would a random boy simply seem in a woman's room? They would meet one other approach and it could be extra mysterious. Changing facets of view may be rather, rather complicated however you would play with it and spot what works. Cool suggestions, rather. I do love a ghost tale, so I feel for those who made Tom extra like a truly man or woman it could be extra of a shock on the finish. Good success, seems like an fascinating tale!

Answer 4

- you go home, and find a note (could be an email on your computer, or maybe a slip of paper laying around someplace)
- the note is a clue to how matt died: maybe it's a note from the killer, giving you a time and place, but no explanation of anything; or maybe it's from matt, and says "How could you have done this to me?"
- that night, you try to sneak back to the school to find some answers, but then someone taps you on the shoulder, and it's the killer, masked behind a hood or something
- you panic and pull away the hood
- the face that you see is none but your own, and you scream
- abruptly, you sit up, and find yourself still in bed at home; it had all been a dream
- later that day, at school, you go up to matt and are really glad to see him
- after talking a while, he hands you a note and runs off to class
- you open the note, and are stunned to find that it says the same thing that the note in your dream said

Answer 5

Tears weld up in my eyes as I stared at him, and though my heart was breaking, something snapped me back into reality. Something had killed him and it was possible that that something or someone was still in the building and I'd be next. I couldn't bare to leave him just lying there, so I drug his body to a nearby storage closet and kissing him one last time, promised I'd come back for him when I took revenge on who or what had killed him.

Answer 6

Does this take palce in now or in the past? Lets have someone chaseing after her but you don't know who they are or what they want?

Answer 7

got to the cops or sumtin