Business Professionals in Health Care industry please answer??

Question

I graduated from college in 1999 and have 5 years experience with a small company and helped develop it. I want to post my resume and I need help with the Objective or Summary section. Does this sound ok:

"Experienced Professional seeks an Administrative position in the Health Care Industry fully utilizing strong customer service attitude, exceptional organizational ability and communication skills."

It sounds generic to me. I used the term "professional" b/c I have 5 years experience after college (some operations and supervisory/management experience, but not enough to go for a management position) Most of my experience was in customer service/customer relations management and small project management.

Also, what does the term "administrative" constitute? Does it include customer service? I do not want to work in a call center position.
Thanks!

Duncan - Thanks, but no thanks.

Answer 1

Yes it is very generic. If you send that out, you will not go far.

1) How do you help develop a company when you're doing admin? Sales professionals are more relevant because they bring in revenue. The others are all cost centres.

2) 'Experienced Professional" - You need to justify. What is your strength. Expert in filing, claims, sending invoices...you need to be elaborate.

You should instead focus more on customer service, customer relations management where you can highlight some of your achievements.

All this are just the tip of the ice berg. You need much more than that to get interviews with large corporations. You might want to consider investing in a Professional Resume Provider.



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Answer 2

Greetings,
I worked in a hospital environment for a decade and noticed a lot of the title and job descriptions changed.
I would recommend a visit to Human Resources at a large hospital and review the job postings for a clearer idea of the related position titles and tasks. Also, I have found few employers respond to generic resumes. You generally have to indicate the specific position with posting number to get responses. ( except maybe very small facilities)
good luck

Answer 3

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