Yes, it's very creative.
2006-10-18 04:56:23
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answered by Joe 6
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No. Do NOT give this to him. It's harmless, but the end of it sounds desperate, that you're afraid to lose him. Never treat yourself like you should be afraid of losing him. Grow some confidence. While you are lucky to have him, without a doubt, you must remember he is just as lucky to have you.
Why are you afraid to lose him? Does he play games? I love my fiance with all my heart but nowhere, not even in the back of my mind, am I afraid of losing him. He never makes me feel like I have to compete for his love. I hope that's not the way your boyfriend makes you feel.
Good luck and best wishes =)
2006-10-18 04:57:08
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answered by A 2
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That is a very romantic thought, but it also sounds as if you are afraid to loose him. Ask yourself: are you insecure with the relationship? I believe you are the only one who can answer this question. Good luck.
2006-10-18 04:56:13
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answered by candywhiteandrew 2
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Awwwwe- my heart is all a flutter!
YES- give it to him. If it can move a total stranger imagine how he will react! He better like it too or I'll have to hurt him!
Have a great day and good luck!!!
2006-10-18 04:57:10
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answered by Coo coo achoo 6
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Sounds to clingy, but that's just what I think. I'm not in your shoes.
I don't know if you ment to use the capitol letters either. But I would change that if you do give him the message.
2006-10-18 04:57:25
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answered by acidcrap 5
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He's a Lucky Guy!!
But the last Line sounds a Bit desperate!
Maybe revise it!?
2006-10-18 04:55:29
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answered by J. Charles 6
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Hell no. First of all spell it right. "Lose" not "loose".
Afraid to lose you? Sounds really desperate and insecure. The rest of it isn't so bad.
2006-10-18 04:56:33
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answered by K R 2
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I think the "afraid to loose you" part sounds too needy. And, that's coming from me, a woman. What do you think a guy will think?
2006-10-18 04:56:05
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answered by Apple21 6
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I heve heard that before, a lot of times! But it's one of my favorite short poems!!! I don't see why not, if you relate to it then go ahead....... I am sure he will love it.
2006-10-18 04:59:07
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answered by Anonymous
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Yes, but fix it.
Add "you" after like and it's "LOSE" not "LOOSE".
Not trying to be a grammar nazi on you, but nothing kills the mood like a spelling mistake.
2006-10-18 04:58:34
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answered by dsr 2
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Sounds great. I would spell lose as l-o-s-e instead of l-o-o-s-e. To lose (rhymes with news) something is to have it taken away from you, to loose (rhymes with moose) something is to intentionally let it go.
2006-10-18 04:58:34
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answered by dougneb 3
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