Does this make sense?

Question

People say change is good. Here is a poem that I wrote about it, does it sound like it is good in this case?
CHANGE

Change is for those,
Who never cared.
Change is for those,
Who wouldn't dare.
If change is good,
Then where is the proof?
Why does my heart,
Still beat so aloof?
Someday the answer,
To the change of a dream,
That never was really,
Nor ever did seem,
To take on a form,
Of love that was real,
All that is accomplished,
Was only to steal,
The heart that was broken,
From beginning to end,
You never knew my real love,
My imaginary friend.

It was always yours and still is.........ME
Written on 10/17/06 for he who is in black.................

Hey critique it, do anything you'd like, it's expected on here, especially from snide b. i. t. c. h. e. s. like you........

Answer 1

Any poem that you write is a good poem. It is an expression of who you are and how you feel. Good Luck ! :)

Answer 2

Is this the catagory you are looking for? Are you looking for us to be impressed with the poem or critique it? What?