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I am writing a short story about a boy who was bullied as a child and had a very harsh life. Now he is 19 and lives in the basement of his abusive mother. One day she gives him an axe so he could cut down the tree outside, but instead he kills his mother with it (it has to have irony) then, he goes around a park and kills everyone he sees because he felt that he needed to take his anger out. When he was leaving the park, he was accidentally hit by a police car. Please help me with it. If you have any ideas, help me

2006-10-17 14:55:19 · 6 answers · asked by Gina H 1 in Education & Reference Homework Help

This story has to include either irony, suspense, symbol, or foreshadowing. Also if you want to read over it, just leave me your email adress and i'll email it to you. Please Help Me. Thanks!

2006-10-17 15:24:52 · update #1

6 answers

It would be more ironic if he went with his mother and cut down the tree but the tree fell on the mother or something of that nature. Also instead of bullied as a child I would be more concrete and make the mom more abusive.

2006-10-17 14:57:51 · answer #1 · answered by serpagon 3 · 0 1

Well, I think it has way too many deaths, the readers will get bored after the first few, since you would go into detail with most, especially that of his mother. I like the irony of the police car but maybe incorporate him having a vision and realizing his mistake with killing his mother before he is killed. That's all I got.

2006-10-17 15:02:17 · answer #2 · answered by kjbouche 2 · 1 1

How about making the story about how this boy overcame the abuse and now is on the road to sucess!
That would make a better story!

2006-10-17 15:16:33 · answer #3 · answered by zoril 7 · 0 0

Thats a wierd story.

2006-10-17 14:57:13 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1 1

i think it needs a touch of humour...... ie something other than killings!

2006-10-17 15:03:50 · answer #5 · answered by Mark 1 · 1 0

has serious irony for sure

2006-10-17 14:57:59 · answer #6 · answered by lazydaisy4991 2 · 2 1

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