can someone please help me with an ending sentance to my story? here is the last paragraph but i just need an ending sentence.
At the cabin in the woods, Annetta’s spirit guards it like a hawk. She does this to scare off the campers that have stumbled upon it. She does this not to be cruel but to make sure what happened to her will never happen to anyone else. Claudia and Aleshia got on in their life without their best friend. Yet every time someone mentioned her name their memory brought them back to that horrible night when she died.
2006-10-17 11:05:41 · 12 answers · asked by [blahh] ™ 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i think that last sentence is good enough for a clincher.
Or try to replace the last sentence with:
yet every time someone mentioned her name dark memories arose to haunt them, as a reminder of that horrible night.
2006-10-17 11:09:56 · answer #1 · answered by apapasilva 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
So if you ever see Claudia and Aleshia, never say Annetta.
or
Annetta's spirit will always guard the cabin in the woods.
or
This brutal memory will haunt eachother for the rest of their lives.
LOL jim w!!!
2006-10-17 18:47:36 · answer #2 · answered by Vanessa<3 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Little did they understand why Annetta's name provoked such deep vivid anguished memories of which they half remembered and half prophesied; for the spiritual bond created in the cabin is greater than the past, present, and future together.
2006-10-18 15:07:21 · answer #3 · answered by Giggly Giraffe 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
The End.
2006-10-17 18:07:56 · answer #4 · answered by heavy6metal9babe 5 · 1⤊ 2⤋
The ending sentence should be "She will never forget that horror filled night when she was brutally murdered." But thats just my opinion,im just a person.
2006-10-17 18:13:29 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
....and the horrible secret they share, never to be revealed, about the cabin in the woods.
2006-10-17 19:21:31 · answer #6 · answered by feather girl 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Although they never speak of what happened, they are haunted by it for the rest of their lives.
2006-10-17 18:12:37 · answer #7 · answered by wrpstar 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
The end.
2006-10-17 18:08:58 · answer #8 · answered by Mikillah 4 · 0⤊ 3⤋
Stay tune for part two
2006-10-17 18:08:00 · answer #9 · answered by justmejimw 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
And noboby wants to be reminded of that night.
2006-10-17 18:10:52 · answer #10 · answered by Kookie 4 · 0⤊ 3⤋