could you tell me your opinion?

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could you tell me your opinion?

What do you think of this for a beginning of a song?
The song is gonna be called "Most Missed Memory"

Here is the beginnning...

I've had alot of good times,
in my life,
but there's one moment, I find,
To be missed, so much.

Just so you know I'm not asking for what the music sounds like I'm asking what do you think of the lyrics?

2006-10-16 17:48:30 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music

Thank you.

2006-10-16 17:53:17 · update #1

good idea! i love it!

2006-10-16 17:55:57 · update #2

2 answers

Nice but I think the first line is catchier as
"In my life, i've had a lot of good times

2006-10-16 17:53:34 · answer #1 · answered by sllyjo 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋

I would like to hear more. You are working on a beautiful message! Best of luck to you!

2006-10-17 00:52:23 · answer #2 · answered by whrldpz 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋