Ok I love to read and write books, though i just resently started one and im only 120 pages into the book and it it already intence, Its about a boy 14 years old who is aboused by his dad and ignored by him mom. at the begaining of the story he comes home late and is draged out of the house by his father, it go's threw with things that hapened threw the next year when he turns 15 he starts geting it to trouble with the police and it gets worse at home with his dad, his sister the only one who cares about him (besides his friends) well something happeneds to her and hes left alone with hies pearnts well i was just woundering if i sould keep going with this book or if i should think of something else.
Sorry for the bad spelling i'm in a rush but my book will have beter grammer i promise!!!
2006-10-16 16:22:41 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
It sounds good to me sso far. I think you should continue. His problems could carry on into his adulthood of course. Or you could take another wild twist ane make his lifestyle and what's happening to him at his age work to his advantage...---------- you fill in the blanks.another suggestion, just mabye the reason his family treated him so bad is because they have been hiding a deadly secret for years. deadly being the key word the only thing i can think of at the minute is that his parents got off on killing and tourturing other people. they did not want him to find out that they were randomly burying the bodies and bodyparts around different places of the house and the yard. next the sister comes up missing..... could he be next or could he unravel the strange events and put them to his own advantage... i don't know? just an idea. if you want i will think some more about it.
2006-10-16 16:28:36 · answer #1 · answered by bustalynn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
By all means finish it off, and see if you can wrap up all the loose ends and bring it to an interesting and satisfying conclusion.
As for the spelling -- it doesn't cost you anything extra to use the spell check, it only takes a couple of seconds, and it's a very good habit to get into.
With a query of this nature, people tend to equate your sincerity (and your ability) with your presentation and a sloppy presentation doesn't inspire a whole lot of confidence. So just a tip from one writer to another --don't EVER send out anything that would embarrass you if someone found it ten years from now and put it on a web site somewhere.....
2006-10-16 17:08:20 · answer #2 · answered by old lady 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The hardest thing for a beginning writer is to actually FINISH a project. Keep at it. If you get stuck, outline your story and start in again. You can also read the last chapter written and use that to jump into the new chapter.
If you finish this story, you are doing better than 80% of first time writers. KEEP AT IT.
2006-10-16 16:46:39 · answer #3 · answered by loryntoo 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well you have written 120 pages. I think it is worth finishing. If you cannot do it now, why not set it aside for a month or so and come back to it. It seems like you have no trouble to write so that's good, and you just need to stay enthusiastic
2006-10-16 16:31:57 · answer #4 · answered by Robert B 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg he can write purely kidding He truthfully revealed a e book entitled A fee to maintain, co-written with Michael Herskowitz. Later variants have the subtitle 'My adventure to the White abode'.
2016-10-02 09:20:08 · answer #5 · answered by duchane 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
r u thinking of being a pro book writer, well if so your story needs to be long more than 120 pages if you want me to read it make it 400 or so pages long and even if your in a rush u should spell right dont take short cut, what are you going to call the book?????
2006-10-17 05:16:58 · answer #6 · answered by mnbmbnm b 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds good; continue
maybe he decides he cant live like that so when he turns 16 or 17 (or before) he runs away, maybe gets mixed up in worse problems since hes on his own and needs to find a way to sustain himself. he could befriend someone that has been through that and maybe helps him out, it could be someone that has a shady life like a hooker or a drug dealer but that somehow has a good heart and helps him on his feet.
Or maybe stays home and by self defense accidently kills his dad by bashing him in his head or something but then runs away because he gets scared that he may go to jail.
Just suggestions but dont give up, it sounds good so far.
2006-10-16 16:34:46 · answer #7 · answered by Esme 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like a good story. Keep writing. Put some more drama into it or something that touches peoples hearts.
2006-10-16 16:32:55 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
absoutly continue, maby the boy can better his life an have a real positive future.Best of luck to you.
2006-10-16 16:35:09 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds like a sad but good book i agree i think you should make the kid kill the dad in self defince, i would read it make it good.
good luck!
2006-10-17 09:14:50 · answer #10 · answered by Kenny Mccormick 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋