NEED HELP!! With a job application?

Question

Ok....I really want this job and I feel that I'm will qualified but don't know how answer this question with out sounding dumb...repecting myself..The job the I'm applying for is Instructional Aid for severely handicapped school kids
Q1:use this additional space to describe any additional experince in the position in which you are applying ?
Q2: Please tell us why you feel are the best qulified candidate for the position?
MY Qualifications are:
volunter for school and science camp,dependable, realiable,pre-med student, great attendent school/work,have assist teacher in class rooms, have clerical experience, American red cross emergency responser, AED trained,First Aid & CPR,
Lived with twin with Down syndrome
and help take care for handicapped grandmother
I could list a number of other experiences that have directed me towards becoming a physician, but ultimately I think that the reason why I want to become a doctor is God gave me a desire and a compassion for people who are suffering whether it is physically, spiritually, mentally or emotionally. And I believe that the job of a physician encompasses all four of these different attributes and allows for healing of the whole person.

Answer 1

Now put those fragments into sentences, make sure your verbs are in the right tense, check your grammar, and you'll be fine.

Answer 2

You nailed it. If they don't like this, then this is not the job for you. Thank you for an inspiring read. You are so well qualified, I would offer one suggestion to Q1 - 1) a) or bullet the experiences so they stand out.
Again - thank you for the inspiring read. I'll use it to wrap up tonight's session.

Answer 3

My friend, with all your qualifications, the only "dumb" thing is your insecurity in asking this question. List what you just told us and go for it! Based on the qualifications you just listed, I'd sure hire you!