this is a poem that I wrote recently...
Please tell me it will be just fine
Promise me that I won't cry
Hold my hand, squeeze it tight
I have a lot of fears and frights
Can you hold me and never let go?
I want to be here so lets take it slow
How can you make me feel this way
I feel it every day
When I think of you it hurts inside
All of these feelings I am failing to hide...
Bottle up and stay there
If only you cared
2006-10-16 06:43:36 · 3 answers · asked by Belle 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
it's goooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep it trying i think you can write better poems with a little exercise you will write nice poems
2006-10-16 06:47:06 · answer #1 · answered by bluelille 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont
but I am curious to what itis about
2006-10-16 13:47:44 · answer #2 · answered by SWANY 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it
2006-10-16 13:45:32 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋