is this correct?

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Witnesses

we, hereby certify that the aforementioned payment has beeb occured in our presence and knowledge.

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is my grammar correct?please do correct me if you think this is wrong...

the payment happens in the presence of our witnesses and they will sign providing that they are there when the mayment has made.

Answer 1

We hereby certify that the aforementioned payment has been transacted in our presence.

Don't say knowledge, it makes it sound like someone may be trying to trick someone.
Capitalize We, take out the comma, beeb should be been.
Never say "has been occurred"-- it's not gramatically correct. You can say "has occurred", but this still sounds awkward. "Has incurred" sounds more professional, and is grammatically correct.

Answer 2

We hereby certify that the aforementioned payment has been received in our presence and acknowledged.

Answer 3

we, hereby certify that the aforementioned payment has been made in our presence and with our knowledge...

Answer 4

we hereby certify, that the above mentioned payment has incurred in our presence and knowledge .

Answer 5

Why would there be a comma after we unless you were defining what we was? Capitalize the W in we. Change the word occured to something else. I guess the word recieved would work.

Answer 6

if someone has owes you id say" on this date, the party mentioned below has agreed to pay (what it is) until such monies has been paid." You dont always have to use big words....just say "on the date below i (your name) have loaned(their name) "the amount" and that have agreed. to pay me(your name) back at a certain time and date. Plain English usually works best....if theres any penalties if they dont pay back in time you can put that there also....

Answer 7

Yes, that's correct

Answer 8

maybe if instead of 'beeb' use 'been'?