How can I stop trying to ryhm when I write a story?. I fully cant write it unless it rhyms, but I dont want to........help.
Or should I just not try to write because I cant write or rhyme?
Check out the first pharagraph I wrote, when I add a detail. Its finished but I couldn't finish (last question) it without rhyming it.
What can I do?. help.
2006-10-16 01:32:36 · 6 answers · asked by Tha Most Shady 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
It’s the beginning of the year 2005, January 10, It’s a beautiful day. I have completely changed, I’m not referring to affects of intoxication, its got something to do with going overseas on a plane. **** I haven’t said it’s a beautiful day in years. Usually I sleep till sombre then at night smoke and commit crime. But that’s over. Not because I’m older, about 12 months ago I, met my Dad who changed my perspective, gave me respect and a second chance to live. See I was doing wrong and getting tired of it, any job I had I was fired or I’d quit. I was an alcoholic that couldn’t afford it, I would rob, plot and rip off pore and rich. Anyways like I’ve said I’ve changed, I’ve got more to think now about like half siblings calling my name. I’m in Sydney today, at about eight…I’ll be in Philippines, I’m looking so forward to the next four weeks. I’ve forfeited a life on the streets.
2006-10-16 01:33:07 · update #1
This could not be taken as a serious story, could it?
2006-10-16 01:36:24 · update #2
Then this is a choppy rhyming scheme, as I had a hard time seeing it
2006-10-16 01:34:56 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 7⤊ 0⤋
sounds really good. you never know it could be a fad that you start with the rhymes! you know people who do performance poetry or other types of performance arts use the same style of writhing. maybe you could get into that.
but if you really want to stop rhyming, then you could use a thesaurus to look up that same meaning if a word but a different word. good luck, you seem very talented!!
2006-10-16 08:39:29 · answer #2 · answered by Stacey 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Who, where is the rhyme?
I's nice though, I'd like to read further.
2006-10-16 08:37:35 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Take what the muse gives you, give it love and attention and don't try to judge it so much as learn from it.
2006-10-16 08:44:35 · answer #4 · answered by beast 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maybe it's because you are a poet? Just go with it!
2006-10-16 08:40:20 · answer #5 · answered by sharon m 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
than better stop writing....or itz ur gift to write in rtymes,so enjoy writing like that....
2006-10-16 08:35:09 · answer #6 · answered by unlucky hand 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋