You should never judge a book by its cover
because you don't know what the pages might reveal
you might learn something new or aquire feelings that were long concealed
some books have many pages some books have very few
but as long as you take the time to read that pages you might find the right book for U!
So everytime you hear these words really really think
does it matter whats on the inside of person or whats within.
2006-10-15 15:35:15 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
Not really a poem. A thought or by-line to an AD for reading. No form.
2006-10-15 15:43:46 · answer #1 · answered by Anna M 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It might be good as a bumper sticker...It would wrap right around the car tho?
Maybe shorten it by 10 or 15 lines so it will fit on a sticker?
You could paraphrase it so it doesnt loose the message and then it would be a truly great bumper sticker..frankly if you cant say it on a bumper sticker give up..
2006-10-17 08:29:26 · answer #2 · answered by cmsrmt 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its okay, its very close to iambic pantameter. If you altered a few lines it will flow better.
Iambic Pantameter = First 8 lines have 10 syllables
Last 2 lines are a rhyming couplet
not bad though
2006-10-15 22:48:28 · answer #3 · answered by isk8 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
reveal the truth
open your book and read what was written for you
the words are right there
how shinny it is
you can never resist
you just follow the words
till the end
leads you to places
take your soul to long journey full of hearts and tears ...tears on cold cold faces
2006-10-15 22:44:31 · answer #4 · answered by no begining no end 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
on it's definition... well established....
on it's composition.... well reasoned out...
on it's construction... kinda poorly done, sorry.
try to refine it more.. the idea is good, the thought is good, but the construction needs some spice and rhyme, okay???
2006-10-15 22:53:07 · answer #5 · answered by VeRDuGo 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Dang! I have found that to be so very true! Great job if you made it up, but if not still great job! You have extreme potential if you made that up. If so keep up the great work!
2006-10-15 22:42:56 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
Awesome for sure!!
2006-10-15 22:43:50 · answer #7 · answered by marilyn b 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Wow - great stuff - too bad poetry is a dead art.
2006-10-15 22:43:27 · answer #8 · answered by just visiting 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋
THAT WAS SO GOOD, I'M GOING TO WRITE THAT ONE DOWN. IT IS SO TRUE, IF YOU MADE THAT ONE UP, THEN YOU DID A GREAT JOB, IF NOT YOU DID A GREAT JOB ANYWAY.
2006-10-15 22:38:09 · answer #9 · answered by tinkerbell 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋
That's awesome...
2006-10-15 22:42:40 · answer #10 · answered by kelsey 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋