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Soon many were wiped out like a flame,
Scurvy was to blame.

Does that work? Or can you put that into another rhyming sentence, you can win best answer!

2006-10-15 14:32:54 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Homework Help

And please no silly answers..
as in the one below which dont help me!!
cause there is something called a REPORT ABUSE button :)

2006-10-15 14:37:04 · update #1

5 answers

so many people were wiped out by the flame,
scurvy was to blame.

2006-10-15 14:44:13 · answer #1 · answered by angel 2 · 1 0

Well...think about when you use your fingers to blow out a candle.
Isn't that a bit suggestive of wiping out a flame? Also water gives the same effect.

I'm not quite sure what you are trying to rhyme. I'll check back to see if you give a more in depth idea. ; )

(Or if someone else was less dense than myself.)

Edit: "snuffed out", just above my answer, is pretty good!

2006-10-15 21:37:40 · answer #2 · answered by tantiemeg 6 · 0 0

You can say "snuffed out like a flame"

2006-10-15 21:36:30 · answer #3 · answered by J C 3 · 0 0

flames might be snuffed or blown out. but it is your poem and as long as it carries the image you desire it is right. That is called poetic license, which even covers misspellings.

2006-10-15 21:38:27 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

I feel it sounds lame
cause it makes me ashamed
To have to take aim
And say it seems so plain.

2006-10-15 21:34:55 · answer #5 · answered by Totoru 5 · 0 0

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