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Flyin high up in the sky
Now i don't have you taggin along
never felt so free in my life
now that i don't have you
I can do anything

I made them up myself but i need to know if they make sense and if you'd listen to it. It is kinda a mix uf punk rock and pop. I am trying to figure it out on my guitar, what i am going to play. So do the lyrics sound good?

2006-10-15 13:39:55 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Music

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Very good lyrics.You have serious talent potential! If your genre is punk rock, the lyrics are too good. They are lyrical, poetic almost. You can't scream lyrics like this. They would fit better in a folk genre or even a ballad. But then this is only five lines. Is the rest equally good? If all your lyrics are this good you should consider dabbling in other genres. You are better than punk rock.

2006-10-15 15:39:48 · answer #1 · answered by Stratobratster 6 · 0 0

Well the lyrics needs more work but I think the lyrics is kinda a pop music if you sing it over and over again it sound like it

2006-10-15 21:00:40 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

They make sense to me, but, they kind of ring more of a moderate country beat. I'm hearing something in the key of D.

2006-10-15 20:48:36 · answer #3 · answered by iuneedscoachknight 4 · 0 0

Nice. If you can scream, do some screaming lyrics too.

2006-10-15 20:40:54 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

um the wiggles called...they want their lyrics back!

2006-10-15 20:49:00 · answer #5 · answered by Dani A. 2 · 1 0

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