Hey guys, I have a couple short essays (about 300 words each I believe), and I was wondering if I could get some opinions on them. They're pretty solid, they've been looked over by a couple other people; I'm not asking you to completely rewrite my essays for me. I just want a couple more pairs of eyes. Anyway, if you'd like to look these essays over for me, respond, and I will email them to you. Thanks!
2006-10-15 12:00:43 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
Sure. Send 'em to me! I'm at work, I have nothing better to do than answer questions...I'd love to proof read your essays. Sad, huh? lol
2006-10-15 12:04:42 · answer #1 · answered by Shining Ray of Light 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maudlin, depressing — a downer of an essay that may cause the admissions officer to defenestrate himself. This is not an essay demonstrating your college potential. Start over. ADDED (for copy editors who need copy editors) Maudlin: Extravagantly or excessively sentimental Effusively or tearfully sentimental tries too hard to make people feel emotions such as love or sadness
2016-05-22 04:54:37 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋