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Question

I need to rewrite this to make it flow better and sumarize just a little bit. Can you summarize it the best????

I am now the director of the new version of HAMLET and I have the most stunning new vision of the most revered of Shakespeare’s plays. I will effectively transpose many of the enduring themes of that classic work to our contemporary hi-tech era. Even if you are not very familiar with Shakespeare's plays or have always been confounded by his verse, one can still appreciate this film.

Hamlet proves to be far more than a mere spectacle for the senses. In fact, this is the serious flaw that plagues most of the films coming from young, talented independent filmmakers these days: all style, no substance.

Well, this Hamlet has both. By setting the film deep in the heart of a very real and very modern steel and concrete American jungle like New York City, which is infused with the relics of the mass media and cold capitalistic consumerism.

Answer 1

Hamlet thinks about his friend Jim, plays some cards, has a beer, goes to bed

Answer 2

*As new director for Hamlet I have produced a new adaptation. I transpose many of the enduring themes to our contemporary hi-tech era. Weather you are familiar with Shakespeare’s plays or not you will still love this film.

Unlike previous versions of the play this one has style and substance. It takes place in NYC and is infused with the relics of the mass media and cold capitalistic consumerism. *