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In the novel “The Small Boat of Great Sorrows” Vlado and Pine gathered all the information needed to find the war criminal-Matek. However, Vlado didn’t follow the International War Crime rules and was laid off the case. At the same time, Vlado had found out many things about his father that he couldn’t give up now. Moreover, he decided to continue with the assignment because now it was personal. As the result, he found out everything about his father’s past and he also captured Matek. He was the hero of the story, who sacrificed his life for the International War Crime and for his curiosity to complete the puzzle he had started.
Since this novel was written in the year of 2003, it is still a modern novel which we teens can relate to. The setting of the novel is very interesting because it takes place in different cities throughout Europe. Most of the story took place in Bosnia, which is a city that is still hurt from the Second World War. This reminded me of my own country-Afghanistan-because the building, people and environment were badly hurt as well. Some of the characters such as the soldiers also reminded me of my past life in Afghanistan.
Undoubtedly, there were many events that related to my life back in Afghanistan. For instance, when Vlado had to flea from his home country he had left everything behind for a search of a better life. Similarly, when we left our country we had to leave everything behind and be lucky to be still alive. Furthermore, this was a very touching situation for me when Vlado had to leave his home country.
Again, this novel is linking to many people’s lives because it almost includes every possible sad situation. For example, the Second World War, Civil Wars, problems with the Police and a lot more is through out fully described which many people can relate to.
To conclude, this is the best novel that I have read in many years which includes different aspects of life, different emotions and feelings and of course lots of ups and downs, which makes the story interesting and suspenseful.

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In the novel “The Small Boat of Great Sorrows” Vlado and Pine gathered all the information they needed to find the war criminal Matek. But Vlado didn’t follow the International War Crime rules and was taken off the case. Meanwhile Vlado found out many things about his father, that he couldn’t give up now as the assignment has become personal. Consequently he found out everything about his father’s past and he also captured Matek. He was the hero of the story who sacrificed his life to complete the puzzle he had started.
Written in 2003, it is a modern novel which we teens can relate to. The setting of the novel is very interesting because it takes place in different cities throughout Europe. Most of the story took place in Bosnia, a city that still feels the pain of World War II. This reminded me of my own country, Afghanistan, which has suffered the same fate. Some of the characters such as the soldiers also reminded me of my life in Afghanistan.
Undoubtedly there are many events that relate to my life back in Afghanistan. For instance, when Vlado had to flee his country he left everything behind in search of a better life. Similarly, when we left our country we had to leave everything behind and be lucky to be still alive. Furthermore, it is a very touching situation for me when Vlado had to leave his home country.
Again, this novel is linked to many people’s lives because it includes almost every imaginable sad situation. For example World War II, Civil Wars, problems with the police and lots more which are vividly described and which many people could relate to.
To conclude, this is the best novel that I have read in many years. It tells of, among others, different aspects of life, different emotions and feelings and of course lots of ups and downs, which makes the story interesting, powerfull and suspenseful.