Am I a good poet? Here is one of mine.?

Question

when the wind blows
and doors of oportunity close
she's there
when summer's at an end
and autumn and winter blend
she's there
without prewarning or purpose
she tries to unearth us
and make us start feeling
remorse and compassion
but more importantly love
she's your mother, your daughter, your sister, your friend
a woman behind her man that will take his pain and make it end

Answer 1

the people will tell a lot of ting but what is important is that u was make a beautuful poem and is verry pure... congratulatione, but sure u must work a lot to can do someting verrrrry spacial....


... O, mamă...

O, mamă, dulce mamă, din negură de vremi
Pe freamătul de frunze la tine tu mă chemi;
Deasupra criptei negre a sfântului mormânt
Se scutură salcâmii de toamnă şi de vânt,
Se bat încet din ramuri, îngână glasul tău...
Mereu se vor tot bate, tu vei dormi mereu..[...]


o mother

O mother swet mother from black times
To the wins of flower to you, you call
Up of the black stone of grave
Are fall the flawers from trees becose of autum and wins
Beating slow from branches, swispering your voice
Always them will beat, always u will sleep.

Mihai Eminescu the bigest poet of my country

Answer 2

Kim Jong important man,
Kim Jong handsome like Tom Cruise,
Kim Jong send poem to Edna and tell
Edna that Kim Jong wrote Poem.

Poem make Edna like Kim Jong.

Answer 3

Yes u r good but there is one thing if i may say
the subject should vary 2 much
nice poem though

Answer 4

It's okay.... If you can make sense of it.

Here's one of mine, but I must admit I was 10 when I made it okay!?

There once was a sister,
Who had a lot of blisters
Her cat had no fur
Her dad wasn't a sir
And that's the horrid side of the sister.

Answer 5

i like this alot. Is it from ur heart?

Answer 6

honestly, its kind of cheesy and not really very good. sorry.