i have this girl that i like and i wanna write a lil peom to her. she know that i like her but she doesnt know how much i like her or my feelings for her. we juss hang out and all now. shes also not really into mushy stuff either. i've tryed writing poems before but i dunno really how to write one that riymes well and she knows that too. so does anyone have any advice for me on how to write one thats not so mushy but still gets my feelings out and kinda ryimes? it would be totally helpful. thax in advince.
2006-10-14 18:37:45 · 5 answers · asked by Mikey 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
First of all,A poem does not have to ryme,Thats for children poems,second,Just speak from your heart and right down how you really feel about her,Tell her how your heart beats faster with happiness when you see her walking towards you!Stuff like that,But be Honest and Speak from the heart!Trust me my friend,this poem will put tears in her eyes,because she,ll know it came from your Heart1Good Luck,Hollywood
2006-10-14 18:50:08 · answer #1 · answered by hollywood 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
fear not my love the hands of time
FOR POEMS DO NOT ALWAYS RHYME
fate runs its course and plays its tricks
but in the last and final mix
one wins it all and loses naught
if love was good and battles fought
to their satisfying end
farewell sweet love
goodbye my friend
2006-10-15 01:52:12 · answer #2 · answered by ChinaCat Sunflower 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
why don't you just write out words to each of the letters of her name?
mary -----
m - marvelous eyes
a - awesome lips
r - rad smile
y - yummy girl
2006-10-15 02:09:22 · answer #3 · answered by sharrron 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
email me at
lifeluvhonour@yahoo.com if u want one or just follow some one else no matter
2006-10-15 02:22:15 · answer #4 · answered by Gundead Grimm the War Dog 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, first of all, great spelling helps. : )
2006-10-15 01:45:29 · answer #5 · answered by *AstrosChick* 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋