I will be giving a toast to my best friend at her wedding reception. I would like opinions as to what you think of my conclusion to the speech. Thanks so much!
May your love deepen and grow, so that what you are feeling for eachother right now, will pale in comparison to the love you will be feeling as we toast you at your golden anniversary.
2006-10-14 17:45:00 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
or how about...
...May your love continue to deepen and grow, so that even the incredible love you are feeling for eachother right now, will pale in comparison to the what you will be feeling as we toast you again at your golden anniversary.
2006-10-14 17:53:48 · update #1
The sentiment is great, and the wording is almost perfect. My problem is with the "will pale in comparison" bit. It seems just a little dismissive of their current feelings for one another. Try to use more positive wording.
Edit: The updated one sounds much better. Best of luck to you!
2006-10-14 17:50:49 · answer #1 · answered by ? 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
The "pale in comparison" reference sort of diminishes their love right now. Instead, I would add something along the lines of also thanking them for letting us share their joy and how we hope it will be 50-fold at their golden anniversary.
2006-10-14 17:54:12 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2016-12-04 20:29:10 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its too much I would think (golden anniversary, will pale in comparison, )
2006-10-14 17:49:08 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
thats tight it sounds like a good choice for a wedding so stick with that you can't go wrong with that
2006-10-14 17:48:00 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You might want to change that 'pale in comparison' to "will be overshadowed by my toast"
2006-10-14 17:47:41 · answer #6 · answered by michael2003c2003 5 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Sounds great.
2006-10-14 18:00:01 · answer #7 · answered by SCHSFAN 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! That is an awesome conclusion and I think it is everybody's hope with their marriage!!!
2006-10-14 17:47:08 · answer #8 · answered by [Insert Cool Name Here] 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds sweet and to the point, go with the second one
2006-10-14 18:17:09 · answer #9 · answered by Nicole 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wonderful! I can bet you money the bride's eyes won't be dry!
2006-10-14 17:47:42 · answer #10 · answered by PANDABEAR 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋