i had the most horrible dream last night
it was horrible cuz u died
i was sitting by ur hospital bed
suicidal thoughts running through my head
the doctor told me ur heart was going to stop
and ur liver would soon give out
so i told him to take mine out
to take my heart take them both
because u took my heart long ago
so in the first i lied
because instead i died
i saved ur life by "suicide"
i saved ur life
and u took mine!!!!
2006-10-14 15:40:07 · 12 answers · asked by im begging u to be my escape 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
You died, so I could live
Should I be happy or should I grieve?
That you're near but cannot be here.
Can you hear me crying
Do you know what I'm thinking
The world's not the same
Without you around.
or a happier version :-)
You died, so I could live
Now, you're part of me.
Nothing can separate us
From dawn till dusk.
Together forever
Till my life from this world departs.
2006-10-14 17:40:00 · answer #1 · answered by TK 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-02 07:37:44 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Horrible.
2006-10-14 15:46:51 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's very sad but it is also very good go to Poetry.com and enter it in the cntest in a chance to have ur poem be put in a book it has happened to some of my poems.
2006-10-14 15:48:11 · answer #4 · answered by Li 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well to tell u the truth that was a pretty good sit in your bathroom kinda a poem after you take a good **** just being honest bye bye
2006-10-14 15:48:12 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, I sort of understand and can relate. It seems a little disturbing. You must be a deep thinking person to write that.
2006-10-14 15:44:57 · answer #6 · answered by scrapper723 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not good. Childish. It would not even get a C in a poetry class.
2006-10-14 16:04:55 · answer #7 · answered by notyou311 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your thoughts were all good but you really need to expand them a bit more when writing them.
Your context was gripping but your writing was poor.
2006-10-14 16:20:26 · answer #8 · answered by ~♥ L ♥~ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Fleeting ideas, rambling, confusing, don't quite your day job!
2006-10-14 18:23:45 · answer #9 · answered by dancinintherain 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its ok. kind of confusing towards the end. other than that it was pretty good. sad.
2006-10-14 15:43:56 · answer #10 · answered by candy12424 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋