no matter wut i said it'll never be enough..
for me to say how much
i really thank god
to have u by my side..
you were the light in my dark
you were the truth in my lies
you were the joy in my pain
&i shall never know how to thank you enough
for being by my side...
when i used to cry..you used to hold me tight
you used to wipe my tears in the dark lonely nights
you used to make me feel i'm the queen of your world&everyone above..
i used to find your heart the safest place to hide
i knew what true love meant only when you were around..
&so i pray we shall be together with our warm sweet love!
2006-10-14 15:36:11 · 9 answers · asked by candy12424 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
It sounds like your friend thinks alot of you. Consider yourself fortunate; not everyone has that.
2006-10-14 15:41:15 · answer #1 · answered by scrapper723 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The world's a beautiful place
Feeling the love and warmth, in your embrace.
That you let me into your heart
And yours in mine
Nothing to separate us
That's all I ask :-)
2006-10-15 00:47:10 · answer #2 · answered by TK 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Context good but her writing needs improvement.
Although I liked her view.
2006-10-14 23:23:50 · answer #3 · answered by ~♥ L ♥~ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like a friend to keep. must have gone through something together to be so close. keep him or her
2006-10-14 22:45:23 · answer #4 · answered by The Must know man 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful. Your friend really did an awesome job. :)
2006-10-14 22:44:17 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Okay, before I can even take the poem serious the spelling needs to be a serious. Don't put "wut" or use the symbol "&."
2006-10-14 22:46:28 · answer #6 · answered by Wendy S 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
2006-10-14 22:39:34 · answer #7 · answered by Pickels 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good but more rhyme would be way better
2006-10-14 22:39:46 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i LOVE it! it sounds great! :)
2006-10-14 22:38:32 · answer #9 · answered by roxanne 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋