This is a song I wrote. Is it good?
2006-10-14 12:12:43 · 27 answers · asked by Tha Most Shady 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Yo Check Me Out......................yo.............y.yo...checkme out...............U Hu...............yo..............
Yo check me out
like something you disagree on
world wide eMCee V.I.P. Icon
since B, hyphen, orn we iz children of tha bong
civillised wit song, otherwise
*** police & law, we wannnt
drugs, gewls & porn
Recognise thugs will rise...........on yo porch.
Debauched.
We don't give a *** if you tha High Courts
We, higher out escourts & buy out resorts
Higher than we waz on our planes from them Airports
*** it.........I'm leaving on a jet plane
& I dont know if I'll be back again.
..............................Al-Quider's happening
Plus your goverments got my name.
They want me for some gang sh!t
thats all, thats it.
Course thr gon' try wipe out a competing syndicate
I am compleetly sick.
........Like your life in tha spotlite
I know you got.........sh!t to hide
keep that in mind
When I grinch landmass on Christmas
................
2006-10-14 12:13:52 · update #1
..............................I pick
A rich bich house and trespass
through tha glass
*** tha Dowr
Pay me money monthly like Crisco
or risk yo
Hotel, Hoe
New .L CEO
This boss wants Casino
Not...a watch from cas...i...o
Harass me & disapear offa tha face of tha globe
To a place where they azs probe
And I'll be like "thanks fo tha wardrobe, dope,
money, & hoe"
Oh...................and that car...................
We Gangsta.
Doin' A.B's. rraaaa
Geting money iz procedure.
You aint ever seen a
Mr Bigg
More sincer than Threats Pimp.
I always walk wit a drink
and dope.
This aint a joke.
This aint a test. you wanna see me dresed like Terrorst
2006-10-14 12:14:31 · update #2
No, sorry. Give it another go.
2006-10-14 12:20:51 · answer #1 · answered by Pundit Bandit 5 · 3⤊ 1⤋
What makes rap good is the flowing of syllables this is what give you the flow how to make your rapping stand use intelligent lines that are not cliche and rhyme with words that the listener is not expecting to hear using rhymes like yo and hoe is just to easy.
2006-10-14 23:43:51 · answer #2 · answered by Ben V 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
umm- well i'm a huge fan of rap and rap lyrics. i like the rap pretty okay but i think ever track id defined by its beat, so as long as u have a killer beat attached to this it should work out pretty good, yadada? keep workin on the rythym tho and good luck- ur on ur way, dude...
2006-10-14 19:22:46 · answer #3 · answered by ♥_mrs.smith 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Where's the song? If you want a smart answser, you need to ask a complete smart question.
2006-10-14 19:14:21 · answer #4 · answered by Charles C 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Well, good songs don't have foul language in it...so no, this is not a good song. By any chance, is it a rap tune?
2006-10-14 20:38:46 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Isnt that that old Barry Manilow song?
2006-10-14 19:54:08 · answer #6 · answered by Nestor Desmond 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Most of the lines in it are from other songs. But if you like it then you obviously don't .. ..give a ...***...
2006-10-14 19:16:11 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Lacks rhythm
2006-10-14 19:13:59 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
Im gona b honest with you, I can rap and that stuff u got is very badd.
2006-10-14 19:21:43 · answer #9 · answered by HighRoller20 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yea! It's real good! For some reason I don't believe you wrote it.
2006-10-14 19:56:57 · answer #10 · answered by Mrs.Chris Brown 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good luck with that stock boy job at Wal-Mart.
You are going to need all your money.... don't quit.
2006-10-14 19:20:57 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋