MY HEART BURNS AWAY
FROM THE COALS OF YOUR FINGERS
YOU LET IT BURN AWAY
AS THE SMOKE LINGERS
THE HEARTS BEATING PULSE
IS LEFT FOR THE FEEDING DEATH
ONE PIECE AT A TIME I FALL
MAKING THIS PATH INTO MY DESTINED HALL
* YOU MISS ME MORE AND MORE
YOU ENJOY ME MORE AND MORE
YOU HATE ME MORE AND MORE
YOU NEED ME ALL THE SAME *
BECAUSE
I AM YOUR ADDICITION
YOU CAN'T LET ME GO
I AM YOUR BEAUTY
AND YOU LOVE ME SO
REPEAT *
REPEAT *
HOLD ME CLOSE
DON'T LET THE NIGHT GO
WE COULD BE TOGETHER
PLEASE DON'T LET GO
I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER
MY DIVINE BEAUTY
2006-10-14 04:50:32 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I guess I actually need you for comments about my song, eh?!
2006-10-14 04:50:56 · update #1
I never get it when someone just says," LALALALALALA?" I mean what is that supposed to mean?
2006-10-14 04:59:05 · update #2
Wow it's wonderful indeed. I wish you were talking about me.
2006-10-14 05:00:16 · answer #1 · answered by Ket-koot 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
My reaction to your song is the same as it was the other day to a pretty, very obese femme with a "You need me, you know you do" T-shirt on: no, I don't need you. Keep working on your songs. Addictions to anything including people are not healthy, but I recall that for the young they are usually a rite of passage.
2006-10-14 11:58:55 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Lalalalalalalallalalalalal
2006-10-14 11:51:37 · answer #3 · answered by silverearth1 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its great i love it.i think you have a act 4 this kind of stuff!but i do like it better as a poem
2006-10-14 11:54:16 · answer #4 · answered by monkyz_r_pimp_59 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Don`t quit your day job.
2006-10-14 11:53:21 · answer #5 · answered by Hamish 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋