Sweet Dreams
I want this girl can’t you see
How much she means to me
And I can’t get her hard as I try
But my feelings for her will never die
I just wish I could get the chance
To take her to one last dance
So I’ll pray now to the man up above
To spend one night with the girl I love
(Chorus)
Many chances I have had
None end good all end bad
But if I could get that one night
I would make everything right
I’d give the world to this girl
Diamonds, clothes, jewelry, and pearls
Do anything to see her smile
To have a chance
I must be in denial
Somehow I passed the test
Asked her out and she said yes
Perfect is how it has to be
If not then she’ll forget about me
Eight p.m. rolls around
I pick her up for a night on the town
Walk up and knock on the door
It opens up and the crowd starts to roar
She’s so beautiful it’s almost painful
Cause I’m in love with an angel
She’s perfect: smart, funny, and kind
I could stare at her till the end of time
(Chorus 2x)
Now it’s time to take her home
Ignore the calls that I get on my phone
Spend as much time with her as I can
Because a chance like this will never happen again
She says what a good time she had
I reply it wasn’t half bad
And in for the kiss I lean
That’s when I wake…
Up from my dream
2006-10-13 18:30:07 · 20 answers · asked by Zach S 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I guess I have to be "the Simon". It was ok, but a bit amateurish. Sorry....you asked our opinion.
2006-10-13 18:34:43 · answer #1 · answered by 2Good4U 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I like these lyrics a lot. It definitely sounds like something I'd listen to because it's honest. I can see that it's coming from a painful place. It's beautiful. And I like it.
2016-05-22 00:29:13 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it !!
Ireally am a complte rock girl and i could really enjoy that song by like Nine inch nails (maybe) or Hender bc the line "Cause I’m in love with an angel" reminded me of lips of an angel or by like a punk rock pop band !
You did an amazing job writing thoose lyrics ! Its a really tough job to write lyrics but if all your lyrics are like that then i think you could do it as a proffession!!
awesome job!
2006-10-13 18:38:02 · answer #3 · answered by Because The Drugs Never Work 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think it's cute. Nice little love song. And I love the ending. Of course, I'm a female. I didn't expect it to end with the dream, but it makes sense. I think it's a hair to long. But, who knows, to music it may be different. I hope to hear it someday. Good luck. You're definitely good at rhyming words (lyrics).
2006-10-13 18:35:16 · answer #4 · answered by one_sahara 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I thought the 1st , 2 sentence is alittle not that right.
but the rest just blew me away. Its really sweet.
Keep on going with those composing!!
2006-10-13 18:40:09 · answer #5 · answered by CindyHoneyy 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Wow that's beautiful! You really have talent. Now you have to find someone to figure out music to it! Good Luck!
2006-10-13 18:33:32 · answer #6 · answered by belladmma 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
How refreshing, the lyrics are not repetitive. Best wishes on a job well done.
2006-10-13 18:34:45 · answer #7 · answered by Cherry_Blossom 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I like it! I'd love to hear it with music! Once you get it finished, post it so we can hear it! Keep up the good work, and good luck!
2006-10-13 18:48:24 · answer #8 · answered by GirlsRGamers2 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
You are so talented its a gorgeous song i love it, keep up the good work
2006-10-13 18:38:19 · answer #9 · answered by tkay. 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Well, to be really honest, it sounds like 1,000 other generic love songs
2006-10-13 18:32:44 · answer #10 · answered by deathbear3 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋