Chorus:
It’s crazy uncontrollable
but simply irresistible
crazy uncontrollable
but simple and complete
let life's path
twist and turn beneath us
until we are lost
and don’t want to be found
the soft playing music turns to Rock
the precious moments never last
It’s simply uncontrollable
It’s Crazy irresistible
oh ooh oh oooh
(chorus)
All the things that come easy
now just make me a little queasy
now I can see that what I knew
was just one piece of all that I am
(Chorus)
It’s crazy
It’s Simple
It’s irresistible
It is Uncontrollable
(repeat all)
good for a twelve year old?
it's supposed to be upbeat rock/hiphop (and yes i know rock and hiphop should never be together)
2006-10-13 10:01:52 · 9 answers · asked by carivala 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
its pretty good.. and no not 'pretty good for a 12 year old'.. its just pretty good.. keep writin.. maybe you'll have a big hit someday;)
good luck *&* best wishes
2006-10-13 10:09:12 · answer #1 · answered by 9*I ♥ Kasey Kahne*9 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The words are nice- i think blending the music will be a bit more challenging but excellent job so far
2006-10-13 17:10:45 · answer #2 · answered by siropson 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is all right how did you come up with that if you are only 12 ? I'm 12 i don't think about that it was good though!
2006-10-13 17:11:29 · answer #3 · answered by Shelby Stale Chip 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its great! and you're twelve?! cool! It takes special talent to blend rock and hiphop, and I think you can make it will work!
2006-10-13 17:08:00 · answer #4 · answered by Rabidactyl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your lyrics are very good, they almost remind me of a poem I made. :)
2006-10-13 17:19:55 · answer #5 · answered by Mean Puppy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i`m sorry but the word "Rock" ruined it all.i hate rock! i like rap and hip-hop
2006-10-13 17:05:37 · answer #6 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It is quite catchy...awesome for a 12 year old!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-10-13 17:05:37 · answer #7 · answered by Gone fishin' 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its alright
2006-10-13 17:04:46 · answer #8 · answered by Chris 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
eh...
2006-10-13 17:05:57 · answer #9 · answered by JM 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋