I have posted a question about a poem yesterday http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AkWJDeC04wdvsY4ojmlP_gHsy6IX?qid=20061012010157AAWs5lw
so i have worked a little bit at it and it has evolved into this:
This is my desk
and this is my s hit
pointless to ask
mine is all that's on it
if u think of borowing
i won't lend u s hit
and the price for takeing
is geting your throat slit
Is it any better?
2006-10-13 00:18:51 · 7 answers · asked by GhostB 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
You can't see me but I'm standing up and applauding with a single tear in my eye...bravo...brrrravo
2006-10-13 00:21:50 · answer #1 · answered by Maestro 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A Crow can never become a Peacock how much ever you try
2006-10-13 07:21:08 · answer #2 · answered by *No Doubt* 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i like it, sounds more like a rap then a poem but still good
2006-10-13 08:01:34 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hmm.. if only shakespeare's still alive. i wonder what he'll say..
2006-10-13 07:38:00 · answer #4 · answered by fifi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I won’t be rude and say, “It is full of ****.”
But I will say this, “It is BULLSHIT.”
2006-10-13 07:34:47 · answer #5 · answered by the Tramp 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
MAYBE BETTER, BUT NOT FRIENDLY AT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-10-13 07:21:20 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hmmmmm.....
2006-10-13 07:39:26 · answer #7 · answered by Ron B. 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋