This poem is dedicated to my friend witch we both now live in different states...
AS the tall majestic palms sway in the warm summer breeze, I look out to the wide open sea, so deep and blue ,like the me I never knew, the sweet whisper of the wind flooded the air, like the ocean without a care, A glance at the past is like watching sand slip through an hour glass,ohh how I miss the green green grass, the sweet smelling flowers, and the peaceful songs of the wild birds, as I stared at the gentle water that flowed under the bridge, I realized something I never knew I missed the most, the soft kiss of the sun on your dark brown hair, or the way you smiled when I made you laugh, , the sun is setting now and the sun changes into moon as the sky darkens ,I glare at the moon and hope you are too, things don’t seem right when you're not by my side, Now I must say goodbye before the thoughts of you make me cry.
By: Trista Mcc
2006-10-13 00:11:49 · 9 answers · asked by Trista 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
please don't wrote any more
or try harder.......
2006-10-13 00:14:17 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 1⤋
It's good okay but when I said it like a song to my mum and dad, they started crying and said " that was a great song"
2006-10-13 07:16:07 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
i really like it i think you should get it published i also write poems if u wanna share more with me let me know my email address is melody5513@yahoo.com and please send me an email with your poem again. I really liked it. TAKE CARE
2006-10-13 07:30:55 · answer #3 · answered by babygirl 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice,but why did you withdraw "Sadie"?
2006-10-13 07:29:32 · answer #4 · answered by St♥rmy Skye 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pass
2006-10-13 07:13:35 · answer #5 · answered by sweetme 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Fab! well done you!!!
2006-10-13 07:49:29 · answer #6 · answered by zantegirl2005 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is very good.
2006-10-13 07:17:16 · answer #7 · answered by heatherlynnmorrow 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
BOOOOOOOOOOOO
2006-10-13 07:14:21 · answer #8 · answered by Vix 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
great !!!!!! your friend would love it !!!!!!!
2006-10-13 07:13:58 · answer #9 · answered by smart 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋