i started this limericks and i need ideas for the last line..
a woman who's nickname was Jan,
who decided to start a band,
i told her good luck,
but their music sucked
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2006-10-12 18:02:26 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
so she got booed off the stage instead
2006-10-12 18:05:46 · answer #1 · answered by memario1214 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Would you mind if I improve your limerick by adding one word to your second line. I'll add UP
A woman who's nickname was jan,
Decided to start up a band
I told her good luck,
But thier music sucked
Guess what,they've finished up banned
This rhymes better but you could still use this last line with your original limerick
2006-10-12 18:39:56 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is one terrible limerick so far. The grammar is wrong and the beat is wrong, and nothing really rhymes.
2006-10-12 18:07:01 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Jan should have had a backup plan
2006-10-12 18:12:09 · answer #4 · answered by tankgirl190 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋