Heyy. I write songs ALL THE TIME, it's my hobby and for some reason this song bothers me so I haven't finished it, you want to give some advice or feedback or something PLEASE! Here check it out:::::
I'm Walking All Alone
Cold,Scared In Misery
Beaten Down To The Bone
Full Of Hate And Lonely
This Is The End You'll Never See
But You Won't Care,You're Never There
Will Haunt You,What You Did To Me
Right Down To Your Last Breath Of Air.
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Thats all i've got because it really bothers me, especially the last two lines. Any suggestions??
2006-10-12 12:10:39 · 4 answers · asked by Kelsey's Mommy<3 4 in Games & Recreation ➔ Hobbies & Crafts
I like it. It has nice words to it!
2006-10-12 13:25:16 · answer #1 · answered by maddydaiber 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you had something happen lately or know of someone going through some problems for you to write this. Or a long shot, it might be something you watched on T.V. or at the movies and bothered you more than you thought it would.
Try and finish it. It might surprise you.
2006-10-12 19:40:53 · answer #2 · answered by kitt_kattkitt 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a wee bit depressing, try and give it a nice ending.
2006-10-12 20:40:36 · answer #3 · answered by glasgow girl 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
try this added some where:::: -BUT THEN, WHEN WILL I EVER BE THOUGHT OF FAIRLY-
i dont rite songs, but i figured it might spark an idea
2006-10-13 14:39:26 · answer #4 · answered by Nick 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋