What do u think about my poem?

Question

I have writen this little poem on my desk at work
my desk my s h i t
don't u dare touch it
not even for a little bit
consequence: throat slit

at the moment is writen in pencil and subjected to changes
what do u think should i rewrite it larger and with a permanent marker?

Answer 1

YES!

also,
you should tape it to something that belongs to your boss

Answer 2

yeah that is pretty good but how about

This is my desk,
not yours you pesk
and if a little bit of it gets messed
your going to wish you had used crest
because all of your teeth are going to be on your vest!

huh? you could use it for a change of pace around Christmas time. add a festive air to your desk. lol hehee

Answer 3

Is that a poem or a threat
for your colleagues to leave
your desk alone???
Well if u like it....then it's OK.
Have a nice day ;-)

Answer 4

Ye syou kids will ant a copy to remember you by, and to take to school. see u at the nobel prize center

Answer 5

Boredom does this to anyone
maybe look at your right side
the man on that desk
might pull you off so throw him the pencil
before he throws you his chair

Answer 6

Too Rude.

Answer 7

It says it all, but is it a poem or a warning?

Answer 8

I would work on it.

Answer 9

is that a poem or a threat to someone?

Answer 10

very creative