Will you tell me what you think of this video? i edited it today, i made another yesterday, but i finally have it even better, would you watch it and tell me what you think?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xhhy5N6msBA
2006-10-11 17:15:52 · 9 answers · asked by ? 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
the clips and scenes are from the video game "final fantasy VIII"
2006-10-11 17:21:41 · update #1
Great job! I left a comment, sorry i misspelled Awesome,lol.
2006-10-11 17:19:36 · answer #1 · answered by hott.dawg™ 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
You are an ametur aren't you. What is wrong with it, let me list the ways:
1. Words should remain on the screen long enough for everyone to read them 3 times over.
2. The shots of the fields are pointless other than to put the words over. Loose them, they have no point. They do not help with the story you are trying to tell. However, the shots of the girl in the field are ok (now there is a point to them).
3. Cut to the beat of the music. Get rid of any flash frames - frames that come on too quickly for the viewer to get what is going on or to recognise the object.
4. Tighten up the shots. You remain on objects too long that seem to have no purpose. Either loose them or shorten them.
5. Get to the love stuff sooner. When the beat of the music becomes harder, that is where the action stuff need to come in.
6. There is a sudden change to the music and it is jarring. It pulls the viewers right out of the film. Fix it.
7. Is the dancing all you have, because it is getting dull.
8. What is with the feather floating up in the air. Show it once because we get it.
9. Your ending stinks. It needs to be stronger and not just end randomly.
10. I liked the transition between the hands at the end. Keep that.
11. You loose the tension between the two men at the end. Faster cutting could help with that as well as a bigger and better resolve. Heartbeats are often used to help create tension as well, so maybe behind the music.
You asked for an honest opinion. Unfortunately, you got one from a filmmaker. I hope all this helped. Better luck next time.
2006-10-12 00:36:32 · answer #2 · answered by Christina 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I loved it I'll give you 10 stars.
2006-10-12 01:17:17 · answer #3 · answered by Kathleen V 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Great Job! You are good.
2006-10-12 00:23:37 · answer #4 · answered by floppydallas 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Cool video!!!
2006-10-12 00:22:48 · answer #5 · answered by pjrpepsi 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
* * * * * 5 stars
2006-10-12 00:32:49 · answer #6 · answered by Angel 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
good job!
2006-10-12 00:30:58 · answer #7 · answered by ♥Sapphire 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
*If you really did this then I say it's pretty awesome.Way to go.*
2006-10-12 00:24:38 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
neat!
2006-10-12 00:20:08 · answer #9 · answered by justme 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋